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Tue Sep 01, 2020 4:43 am
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starlitmind says...



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Hey there, welcome to my review request thingy! c:

What I Will Review

I'm open to pretty much anything! Poems, stories, novels (although if you request a review for a middle chapter, I will probably not read previous chapters), and whatever else!

Note: I don't think I will be good at reviewing art, as I'm not a very experienced artist.

Credibility

feelings of music

colourful musings

Chronicles of Valarian 5: Into the Storm

Echoes of Summer

Other

- If for any reason I do not want to review your work, I can decline it.

- If there is something specific you would like feedback on, please let me know!

- I plan to complete your review within a week, but I do apologize if it takes me longer. I will probably get it done on a weekend.

- To request a review, just leave a reply with the link!


Thank you <3
Last edited by starlitmind on Tue Sep 08, 2020 10:57 pm, edited 5 times in total.
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Tue Sep 01, 2020 5:30 pm
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Atticus says...



Hey star! I'm honored to be your first request. I'd really appreciate your thoughts on this poem of mine when you have the time!
[he/him]

"tiktok and giving children meth are my passions" ~ @ShadowVyper
"carinas long foretold chaos protege" ~ @veeren
"smol bean, future of chaos" ~ @carina
  





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Tue Sep 01, 2020 10:25 pm
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Hey, @Tuckster! :D Thanks a bunch for the request; I'll try to get to it soon! <3
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Tue Sep 01, 2020 10:37 pm
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momonster says...



hi! i would be honored if you reviewed my works! here's the link to one:

sand

thanks! :D
For sin shall no longer be your master, because you are not under the law, but under grace.
Romans 6:14 NIV

never apologize for standing up for what you believe in.

previously MomoandAppa, LordMomo, MomoMajesty, and dancingontheclouds
  





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Tue Sep 01, 2020 10:41 pm
starlitmind says...



Hello, @MomoandAppa! :D Thank you very much for the request; I'll try to get it done soon! <3
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momonster says...



np take as much time as you need!
For sin shall no longer be your master, because you are not under the law, but under grace.
Romans 6:14 NIV

never apologize for standing up for what you believe in.

previously MomoandAppa, LordMomo, MomoMajesty, and dancingontheclouds
  





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Sat Sep 05, 2020 1:04 pm
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starlitmind says...



Okay! I’ve finished both of yours and am open for more requests :D
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Thu Sep 17, 2020 10:53 pm
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Riverlight says...



Here's the first chapter of some old stuff I'm revising.

The Middle Years - Chapter One
The politics of the world may be corrupt, but that does not mean that we must be corrupted ourselves.
  





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starlitmind says...



Thanks for the request, @Vil!! I’ll try to get it done as soon as possible c:
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Thanks :)
The politics of the world may be corrupt, but that does not mean that we must be corrupted ourselves.
  





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Sat Sep 19, 2020 8:43 pm
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momonster says...



hey star! i'm back with another request!

The Guard
it's a script, not a story, so if you don't want to review it, that's totally fine! thanks!
For sin shall no longer be your master, because you are not under the law, but under grace.
Romans 6:14 NIV

never apologize for standing up for what you believe in.

previously MomoandAppa, LordMomo, MomoMajesty, and dancingontheclouds
  





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Sat Sep 19, 2020 9:29 pm
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Hey, you! c: I’m totally open to reviewing it, @LordMomo! I’ll try to get to it as soon as possible <3
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Sat Sep 19, 2020 9:31 pm
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momonster says...



thanks! take as much time as needed, there's no rush!
For sin shall no longer be your master, because you are not under the law, but under grace.
Romans 6:14 NIV

never apologize for standing up for what you believe in.

previously MomoandAppa, LordMomo, MomoMajesty, and dancingontheclouds
  





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Tue Oct 06, 2020 7:05 pm
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Riverlight says...



Hey there, star!

I have a new story I've started for LMS that I'd love feedback on. <3

His Name is Richard - One
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Tue Oct 06, 2020 9:22 pm
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starlitmind says...



Hey, @Vil, thanks so much for requesting a review!! c: Realistically, I probably won't get to it until this weekend; I hope that's okay with you! <3
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