Young Writers Society

Hello! Welcome to Que’s Review Corner.


I am happy to review almost anything!
Novels, short stories, and poetry are all fine by me. I will accept things like essays and scripts when needed, but I’ve had less experience with scripts and I won’t necessarily be an expert on all essay topics.

You’re welcome to bring me later chapters of a novel as well, but I won’t be able to read through all of the previous chapters so I will work with what’s in front of me.

I would prefer not to review...
...anything with excessive language, violence, or graphic details. Language is the least concerning of these, and I can take some violence, but really anything overly dark or obscene is not something I will read or review for you.

How I’ll review
If there’s anything in particular you’d like me to focus on in your piece (character, plot, flow, etc.), let me know in your post! I will be sure to address it.

I generally review with some paragraph/stanza-specific points, and then more overall thoughts, both things that could use some work and things that went well, and I try to be honest but not overly harsh.

I’ll review your piece as soon as I am able to, and generally should get to it within a few days. If something should come up and I need to delay, I’ll let you know right away.


Just leave me a link and I’ll get right to it!

Hello Que,

I'd like you to review the first chapter of my novel. It's got a light dusting of violence but nothing much.

And don't worry about being harsh, I like good honest reviews.

So here it is : The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 1

Thanks in advance,
Harry

Hi @HarryHardy, thanks for requesting a review! Sorry for a bit of a delay, I've been traveling--I will get this done by tomorrow!

Thanks @Que for accepting the request. I'll look forward to your review.

Thank you for taking the time to review @Que. I do hope you'll eventually take a look at chapter 2.

Can you review my short story and newly published poem?

Verex RACH
​Verex RACH

Under the sunlight
Under the sunlight

Sure thing! I'll see if I can get to both today, but one of them might be tomorrow. ^_^

Hello @Que. Here to do a formal request for Chapter 2 of my novel.

Could you please take a look at it?

Here's the link: The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 2

Thanks in advance.

Hi, Que. Could you review my short story 'Unbiased'? It's an entry for a contest, and I'd like to have some criticism on the following aspects:

1. The word count for the contest is 1500, and this story for now is almost 1900 words. So I'd like to know which parts in the story could be shorter.

2. The theme of the contest is: 'We will never stop fighting for this planet' - Greta Thunberg. How can young people make change happen? I'd like to know if the story is able to represent this theme well enough.

3. It'll be really helpful for me if you mention how it will do in this contest, what my chances are at winning, etc.

Here's the link: https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/Tawsif/Unbiased-147820

Thanks in advance!

Hello @Que

Sorry for troubling you three times in a row.

*gets on knees and bows deeply*

Could you please review the third chapter of my story(thanks for the like by the way)

Here's the link : The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 3

@HarryHardy of course! I keep meaning to do it on my own but apparently I'm not good at remembering, thanks for reminding me.

Thanks again @Que for the review!!

Hi @Que

I've come to beg for a review once more. Sorry.

Could you *kneels down* please take a lot at Chapter 4.1 of my novel?

Here's the link: The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 4.1

Hi, I noticed you were open to doing reviews so I was wondering if it’d be alright if you took a look at newest short story ‘Song of a Muse’

It’s cool if you can’t, I mainly just want to receive as many opinions on it as I can on since I’m not entirely sure of what I think of it myself.

So, yeah. If you have the time here’s the link:
The Song of a Muse

Thank you again for taking time to review. Hope you stay healthy!