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Sat Jun 06, 2020 11:49 am
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Haraya says...



I changed the title since I thought enjambment was already implied by saying line breaks so it would sound redundant. But yes, it still has a relation to enjambments.
  





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Sat Jun 06, 2020 11:50 am
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Shadeflame says...



@Katteex
No, it's fine. I'm not in a rush so don't worry. :D
English isn't a language, it's three languages stacked up on top of each other wearing a trenchcoat.
  





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Sat Jun 06, 2020 11:55 am
kattee says...



@Haraya, But is it connected to the poem? By that I mean, does the message of your poem revolve around the title? Not just you indicating that it's from a prompt? I'm just making sure because this substantially affects the way I interpret your poem.
If you want some sweet reviews to your poems, short stories, and essays, come by Katteelogue.

Have a lovely day❤️
  





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Sat Jun 06, 2020 12:00 pm
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Haraya says...



Ah yes it's connected. Sorry if I confused you.
  





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Sat Jun 06, 2020 12:06 pm
kattee says...



Oh! My review might delay. I interpreted it differently -- oops sorry. @Haraya
If you want some sweet reviews to your poems, short stories, and essays, come by Katteelogue.

Have a lovely day❤️
  





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Sat Jun 06, 2020 12:08 pm
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Haraya says...



It's okay! Take your time.
  





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Mon Jun 22, 2020 9:25 pm
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xenon says...



hey! here's a chapter of a novel i'm working on!. it leans fantasy but i'm trying to weave in sci-fi elements. whenever you have time, I'd love a comment or review
  





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Tue Jun 23, 2020 3:19 am
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kattee says...



Sure! I'd be on it:) @xenon
If you want some sweet reviews to your poems, short stories, and essays, come by Katteelogue.

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Thu Jun 25, 2020 10:01 am
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kattee says...



@xenon the review will be posted in a few hours. I'm sorry that it's a bit late :(

edit: posted!
If you want some sweet reviews to your poems, short stories, and essays, come by Katteelogue.

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Sat Jun 27, 2020 1:59 am
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Cow says...



Hi-ya! If you have the time, would you mind reviewing my main story, Sunshine Fog? I'll link you the first chapter! If you want, you can review one of my poems or a short story for something not as long. : )

Chapter 0 - A Preface Before You Read! This is the preface to the story, if you'd like a very very general idea of it.

Chapter 1 - I'm Thinking here's the link to the first chapter for you! <3
  





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Sat Jun 27, 2020 2:35 am
kattee says...



I don't mind at all! In fact, I'll post the review by today or tomorrow, @Cow :D
If you want some sweet reviews to your poems, short stories, and essays, come by Katteelogue.

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Tue Jul 14, 2020 6:45 am
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KateHardy says...



Hello @Katteex or should I be saying the damsel in eustress.

Could you take a look at this first chapter of my new novel?

I know you're busy with The Successor: The Fall of Morrow but please?? *offers cookies*

Here's the link: The Alpha Pack: The Dawn of the Dead, Chapter 1
Stay Safe
The Princess of Darkness

Hello! You? Yes you reading this. Have a nice day because you're wonderful and you deserve it!

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Tue Jul 14, 2020 9:28 am
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kattee says...



@harryhardy -

*throws cookies* I'll only receive the reviews you wrote

On a serious note, sure! But I can't promise an immediate review. When I finished up at least Chapter 3.1, then you're next!
If you want some sweet reviews to your poems, short stories, and essays, come by Katteelogue.

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Tue Jul 14, 2020 9:38 am
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KateHardy says...



Okay thanks for considering @Katteex

*picks up cookies to give to someone else*
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