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Gem's Fairy Garden



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Tue Apr 28, 2020 10:40 pm
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fatherfig says...



I will review poetry and short stories, I will not review novels if you have over five chapters posted before you decide to tell me to review it. Give me the link and I will fly over, but I have work to do as well so please be patient. <3
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  





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Fri May 01, 2020 5:13 am
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Fishr says...



Mon Amour (Part I)

Please?
The sadness drains through me rather than skating over my skin. It travels through every cell to reach the ground. I filter it yet strangely enough, I keep what was pure and it is the dirt that leaves.
  





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Fri May 01, 2020 11:39 am
fatherfig says...



I don't review romances often but I will do my best. <3 I've read over most of your chapters to get a good grasp. I hope the review is to your liking. <3 @Fishr
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  





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Wed Sep 02, 2020 1:33 pm
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fatherfig says...



(Will review for Food.)
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  





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Tue Sep 08, 2020 4:52 pm
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Riverlight says...



@LadyGemstone, have a nice poem!

Two Lovers Far Apart
The politics of the world may be corrupt, but that does not mean that we must be corrupted ourselves.
  





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Tue Sep 08, 2020 5:02 pm
fatherfig says...



Right on that my good sir!
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  





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Thu Sep 10, 2020 5:43 pm
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Riverlight says...



Here's a short story/prequel I revised today that I'd love feedback on!
The Last Words of Rory the Fourth
The politics of the world may be corrupt, but that does not mean that we must be corrupted ourselves.
  





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Thu Sep 10, 2020 6:04 pm
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fatherfig says...



Thank you. I'm trying to catch up on schoolwork but I'll get your two reviews in as soon as possible. <3 @Vilnius

If I could have predetermined my teacher lying to my face I would have waited to open my thread my apologies. <3
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  





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Thu Sep 10, 2020 6:09 pm
Riverlight says...



Take your time! Teachers are evil this year.
The politics of the world may be corrupt, but that does not mean that we must be corrupted ourselves.
  








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