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Thank you for taking the time to review it @whatchamacallit. And for pointing out all those places for the commas.

Hi, Whatcha! How're you doing?

Well, I'm here to request another review. It's an entry for a contest, and I'd like to have some criticism on the following aspects:

1. The word count for the contest is 1500, and this story for now is almost 1900 words. So I'd like to know which parts in the story could be shorter.

2. The theme of the contest is: 'We will never stop fighting for this planet' - Greta Thunberg. How can young people make change happen? I'd like to know if the story is able to represent this theme well enough.

3. It'll be really helpful for me if you mention how it will do in this contest, what my chances are at winning, etc.

Here's the linkhttps://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/Tawsif/Unbiased-147820

I'll be glad if you could find some time review this, because you were an amazing reviewer of my novella "Lockdown"!

Thanks in advance!

Hello @Tawsif! Thank you for the review request! I'll make sure to get to that by Monday so you have time to read it before the contest!

Alright. Thanks.

All done @Tawsif!

Hello @whatchamacallit!
Can you please review my poem Frittering away. I have seen your reviews to be very detailed and helpful. I will love to know how I can improve.

@Hkumar sure thing! I'll get to that in the next couple of days!

Thank you so much for your input. It was really helpful

Hi Loonzy,

I've come to beg for a review.

*kneels down*

Could you please review Chapter 4 Part One of my novel?

It can be found here: The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 4.1

All caught up @HarryHardy!

Thanks a lot @whatchamacallit !!

Uh hi, I saw in the forums that you were doing reviews and I was wondering if I might be able to make a request?

It’s for my short story ‘Supernova’ that I published a while ago and though it has already received about 3 reviews I was wondering if I’d be able to get some more constructive criticism on it since I’d like to perhaps publish it professionally one day. Is that alright?

It’s cool if you don’t have the time but here’s the link if your free
Supernova

@HGsomeone I'll definitely review that for you! I'll make sure to get to it by the weekend!

Edit: review complete!

Hi Loonz,

I am back to beg for another review,

Could you please take a look at the latest part of my novel?

The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 4.3

Thanks in advance.

Hi Loonz,

I am back to beg for yet another review, gets on knees

Could you please take a look at the latest chapter of my novel?

The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 5

Thanks in advance.