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Sat Jun 19, 2021 2:04 am
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Hijinks says...



@Liminality review delivered! Thanks for requesting one <3
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green

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Fri Jul 02, 2021 1:21 pm
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ForeverYoung299 says...



Hey can u pls review Mr. Quirk(Chapter 1) ? Looking forward to it.
  





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Sun Jul 04, 2021 9:58 pm
Hijinks says...



@ForeverYoung299 for sure! I'll get to that sometime this week c:
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green

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Tue Jul 13, 2021 12:42 am
Hijinks says...



@ForeverYoung299 sorry for the delay, but your review's been delivered! :)
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green

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Fri Jul 16, 2021 4:41 pm
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roshi says...



Hello, my friend recommended you. I would request you to review my article. this is my first time writing something.

Dhirubhai Ambani vs The Bear Cartel

Thank you.
  





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Mon Jul 19, 2021 6:52 am
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rida says...



Brave and courageous @whatchamacallit of the kingdom of reviewers, it is I, @rida, a humble and honest reviewer in need of another fellow reviewer, for chaos has struck!
‘Tis about a work of mine, a poetry from my heart, that has been published recently.
The evil sorcerer of the kingdom of green room, has abducted my work! Fighting is useless, and I have thus, made a bargain….
My work, ‘tis lonely, and must receive two reviews. Two reviews and the sorcerer shall relieve my poem of captivity!
I, @rida of the kingdom of laziness, ask for your help in fulfilling the requirements!
Here I give the portal to the work,
We are [curios about it? Well then, click this!!!!!!!]
If, by my luck, shall you accept it, then I wish you a better luck than anyone else’s.
Goodbye, courageous and amazing reviewer
-rida in need of a review
  





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Sun Aug 01, 2021 7:40 pm
Hijinks says...



@roshi @rida I'm so sorry for the delay! I've been really busy recently -- but I promise I'll get to both of your reviews sometime in the next couple of weeks. Thank you for being patient ^^
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green

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Tue Aug 24, 2021 7:59 pm
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RandomTalks says...



Hey! I don't know if you are still up for reviewing, but I would be really grateful if you could review my novella The Old Man And The Boy. It contains 8 short parts and an epilogue. It is a story about a boy's growth and development and it takes place mostly through short simple conversations. Don't know if that's the sort of thing that interests you, but I would really love to have your feedback.

Here's the link for the first part:

The Old Man And The Boy 1

If you are interested then I will send the rest of the links as well, or you can just find it there.

Let me know!
“Life’s under no obligation to give us what we expect. We take what we get and are thankful it’s no worse than it is.”

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Sun Aug 29, 2021 5:57 pm
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Hijinks says...



@RandomTalks I can certainly review all those parts over the course of RevMo!

(Also @rida I just wanted to let you know I haven't forgotten about your two poems, and they will definitely get a review from me at some point during RevMo as well! <3)
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green

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Mon Aug 30, 2021 9:15 am
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rida says...



No probs! ^_^
  





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Fri Sep 10, 2021 1:30 pm
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EsmerayaRose says...



Hello, brokenHeartsAri here to drop off a poem!!

Bright Lights
I promise this type of pain only gets worse
~Esmeraya~

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Sat Nov 13, 2021 8:33 pm
MissGangamash says...



Hi!

Any chance you could review part 1 & 2 of chapter 6?

Fool Without A Master (Chapter 6 Part 1)
  





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Fri Nov 19, 2021 8:29 pm
Fishr says...



Hi! I would love a review on this total overall of re-writing, please.

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=153043

It's rated Everyone. Thank you!
The sadness drains through me rather than skating over my skin. It travels through every cell to reach the ground. I filter it yet strangely enough, I keep what was pure and it is the dirt that leaves.
  








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