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Tue Sep 29, 2020 2:32 pm
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KateHardy says...



Heyy Loonz!!

Could you take a look at these two short stories?

A Day Off Part 1

A Day Off Part 2
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Sun Oct 11, 2020 8:28 pm
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MissGangamash says...



Hey! I need help getting my last two chapters of my novel out of the green room. Can ya help me out? The Rage (Chapter 7)

If you have the time to read the novel from the beginning, that would be awesome! But if not, the last 2 chapters is fine :)
  





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Tue Jan 05, 2021 9:28 pm
Hijinks says...



@HarryHardy @MissGangamash sorry for the incredible delay! I'm able to review your requested pieces now if you'd still like those reviews - but if you've gotten all the reviews you need at this point that's fine too. Just let me know if you still want me to review those works and I'll drop by sometime this week <3
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

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Tue Jan 05, 2021 9:58 pm
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MissGangamash says...



It doesn’t matter now, I’ve just uploaded chapter 24 😂
  





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Tue Jan 05, 2021 10:01 pm
Hijinks says...



@MissGangamash haha alright! If you'd like a review on any of the later chapters, instead, just let me know :)
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

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Thu Jan 07, 2021 1:41 am
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KateHardy says...



I'd still love a review!
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Thu Jan 07, 2021 11:25 pm
Hijinks says...



@HarryHardy yay! I'll get to those sometime in the next week ^^
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green

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Sat Jan 09, 2021 2:31 pm
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MissGangamash says...



The Rage (Chapter 24) and onwards are still in the Green Room so if you have time, I'd love you to review them :)
  





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Thu Jan 21, 2021 4:24 am
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raindrops says...



Hi! raindrops here.

I am new here in YWS and looking for reviews that are constructive and actually criticizes my work, so I hope you have time for these first few chapters of the novel I am working on. Thanks in advance.

Entropy - Chapter One
Entropy - Chapter Two
Entopy - Chapter Three
  





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Fri May 21, 2021 11:01 pm
Hijinks says...



Just going to bump this thread ~ still taking review requests!
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green

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Sat Jun 05, 2021 4:36 am
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looseleaf says...



Hey whatcha! I hope you're still taking requests because I have a chapter that needs reviewing. :) It's chapter two of my series, so it's not far enough in that I think you'll be completely lost.

  





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Sat Jun 05, 2021 2:58 pm
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Hijinks says...



@looseleaf I sure am! I'll get to that sometime this week ^^
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green

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Wed Jun 09, 2021 12:27 am
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Hijinks says...



@looseleaf review completed! c:
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green

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Mon Jun 14, 2021 2:57 am
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Liminality says...



Hiya whatcha! Wondering if you could help get my poem Floodgates with missing keys out of the Green Room please c:
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Tue Jun 15, 2021 8:12 pm
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Hijinks says...



@Liminality someone beat me to getting it out of the green room, but I'd love to leave you a review! I'll get you one by this weekend ^^
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green

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(previously whatchamacallit and Seirre)
  








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