Young Writers Society

I'm trying to get back into reviewing and looking for a place to start. That's where you come in.

I will review:
-Short stories
-Scripts
-Articles/essays
-Novel chapters

My reviewing style is very detailed and honest, and I don't shy away from giving constructive criticism. (You can look at my most recent reviews to see what I mean.) If you're okay with that, respond below with a link to your piece (or just the title of it) and I will get to work. ^_^

UPDATE: I'm taking a break from reviewing and not currently accepting requests.

Hey, if it's alright could you possibly review some chapters of my ongoing novel "The sticks" (Chapters 1 to 7 are available)
I haven't had much feedback and since it's a first draft I really need that constructive criticism!
Thank you so much

4revgreen wrote:Hey, if it's alright could you possibly review some chapters of my ongoing novel "The sticks" (Chapters 1 to 7 are available)
I haven't had much feedback and since it's a first draft I really need that constructive criticism!
Thank you so much

You've got it! I'll start working on it shortly.

Kassiani wrote:

4revgreen wrote:Hey, if it's alright could you possibly review some chapters of my ongoing novel "The sticks" (Chapters 1 to 7 are available)
I haven't had much feedback and since it's a first draft I really need that constructive criticism!
Thank you so much

You've got it! I'll start working on it shortly.

Thank you so much!

I'm re-opening this thread for a bit. If anyone's in the market for a lengthy, in-depth review, hit me up.

Hi. I was wondering if you could review my short story Last Spring .

Just something I thought I’d mention, it’s kind of long, more the length of a short story you would find in a book (it was twelve pages in a google doc), just thought I’d tell you so you’re not suprised when you scroll down but it doesn’t reach the bottom.

Have a good day!

—IamI

IamI wrote:Hi. I was wondering if you could review my short story Last Spring .

Just something I thought I’d mention, it’s kind of long, more the length of a short story you would find in a book (it was twelve pages in a google doc)

You got it! And no worries about the length, I don't mind (though I appreciate the heads-up).

UPDATE: Sorry, unfortunately I have to vanish from the site for a bit, due to some real-life complications. Don't worry though, @IamI: reviewing your piece is at the top of my to-do list once I return.

@kassiani it's fine! Sorry I didn't see this earlier, it's out of the green room now and it has two good reviews already, so you can strike that off your to-do list if you want.

I'm really hoping this doesn't come of as passive-aggressive or something, just know that if it does that wasn't my intention.

Have a great day!