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Wed Aug 07, 2019 3:18 am
DottieSnark says...

Hi guys! I love being a review fairy but I also know how frustrasting it is to be waiting on that review that never seems to come, so I decided to open up requests for my reviews.

My reviews tend to between 250 to 300 words, or two paragraphs, though they are often longer. I focus on all sorts of things from SPaG and formatting to plot and characters, depending on what I think would be most valuable for you. Please let me know if there is something you want me to focus on.

What I will review:
-Chapters of Novels*
-Short stories
-All ratings (18+ content requires a content warning).

*I will read isolated chapters. Feel free to give a summary of the previous chapters. I will not read an entire novel in one go. If you would like me to read the entirety of your novel you must continue to make requests of each chapter. You may request up to three chapters or up two five thousand words (whichever limit is reached first) to be read in one request. The only exception to that rule is if you are submitting one chapter that exceeds five thousand words.

What I won't review:

I reserve the right to decline requests. I hope to have all reviews filled without a week of the request.

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Mon Sep 02, 2019 10:02 am
wetumbrella6 says...


I would be glad if you can review the first chapter of my novel named "Jaime".

It is 9k words long.

Here's the link to it:

Jaime (working title) chapter 1

thanks so much for considering

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Wed Sep 04, 2019 2:20 am
DottieSnark says...

@wetumbrella6 I can't review your fic because it's unavailable. Let me know when you've posted it for the public again. :D

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Fri Sep 06, 2019 1:30 am
Miraculor77 says...

Hi! Can you review the following chapters for my novel Code: Delete?
Chapter 5: Willow
Chapter 6: Contract

Thanks for considering. :)

EDIT: I removed Chapter 7 because I saw that you had already reviewed it before.
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Thu Oct 10, 2019 7:23 pm
LadyMysterio says...

Hello would you be in to review my story( part one)
Here is the link : profile/Lady%20Mysterio./portfolio/474957
Now If you'll excuse me I have to destroy Jotunhiem

It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
— JRR Tolkien