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Young Writers Society


Will Review Short Stories and Poetry



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Sun Jul 14, 2019 2:50 am
Horisun says...



What I Will Review
I will review short stories, poetry, and on occasion, a novel, but only the prologue or first chapter.

What I won't Review
I will not review 16+ or above.
I won't review your novel unless it is chapter one, or you request more reviews for the next few chapters.

The review may vary in leagth. My reviews tend to be shorter than others, but I do like analyzing some peices that I really get into.
I tend to focus on the flow, plot, etc, but I do sometimes to point out grammar or spelling mistakes.

Please leave a link to your work, the title, the genre, and a short summary.
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Thu Jul 18, 2019 7:23 am
kingopossum says...



Hi, can you review my short story, A Heavenly Song? I'm bad at determining genres but it might fall somewhere between suspense and very mild horror? As for a summary, it's about a man named Connor who wakes up on his ship and finds his crew missing with no real idea why, eventually discovering a siren off the side of his boat.
  





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Thu Jul 18, 2019 12:38 pm
Horisun says...



Alrighty! I'll get to it sometime today or tomorrow!
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Wed Oct 16, 2019 8:15 am
Horselover1001 says...



Can you review How I found the house please.
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Wed Oct 16, 2019 8:48 pm
Horisun says...



@horselover sure thing! Can you create a link to it?
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Sat Sep 05, 2020 9:45 am
Horselover1001 says...



I made a link, and I just published another WAY longer story that I was wondering if you could review as well, it's called The Rise and Fall of Casey Woodland. It's not quite finnished but it's getting there
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Sat Sep 05, 2020 9:51 am
Horselover1001 says...



The rise and fall of Casey Woodland
How I found the house.
You may not want to review The Rise and Fall of Casey Woodland, it's quite long.
  





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Sat Sep 05, 2020 11:47 pm
Horisun says...



I'll check it out! I'm sorry I didn't get to reviewing it last time... Something came up, and I sort of forgot about this thread
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