Young Writers Society

Hey all,

Because it's summer and I have more time, I want to review your work! I tend to be succinct and focus on big picture, but if there's anything you want me to focus on, feel free to mention it. I'll review pretty much anything except novels at this time, unless I'm able to start from the beginning. Reviews will take 2-3 days, and I'll take a queue of up to 3 at a time. I prefer prose to poetry, and genres like drama/romance/historical fiction to sci-fi or fantasy, and there isn't any content level I'm uncomfortable with.

So get those requests in, and feel free to reach out with questions/requests!

Hey! Would you mind reviewing this poem?
Why, Internet?
Thank you!

Done! @JadeLotus

Thanks again!

Would you please review my new story?https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/LJF/How-To-Say-No-Prologue-145021

Warning: It's pretty dark.

I certainly can. I'll get to this week

@LJF done

Hi.

I would be glad if you can review the first chapter of my novel named "Jaime".

It is 9k words long.

Here's the link to it:

Jaime (working title) chapter 1

thanks so much for considering

@wetumbrella6

Hey there, sorry for the delay, I'm only just now seeing this. It says the work is private so I can't see it. 9K words is also a bit long so I'll happily look at it if you break it up into smaller chapters.

Hi Elinor!

It’s not quite completed but I could use a second pair of eyes for its expansion. Thank you!

British Love, Boston Affection (part II) (Rated R)

Alll done @Fishr!

Thank you! It was very helpful. Thank you again for taking time out of your day to help me out.

(Sheepish smile) May I request another review? I’m not sure if it is too long to post all in one sitting but I wasn’t sure the best way to break it up without hurting the flow. I hope it doesn’t end up being too daunting.
Pugna Pro Patria

@Fishr I’m leaving on a 2 week vacation tomorrow so I won’t have the time to look at it before then, I can definitely look at it after I get back!

Happy vacation! Thank you again!