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It's a Review Day! NEW! Earn more points for reviewing long works in the Green Room! And the top two reviewers will earn YWS Swag! 19 reviews so far! Our goal is 150, so just 131 reviews to go with 1266 minutes remaining...
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457 Reviews


Gender: Female
Points: 23466
Reviews: 457
Tue Apr 26, 2022 8:36 am
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Liminality says...



Sure @RandomTalks! I'll get to that latest by Saturday (might even be able to review it today) :D
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30 Reviews


Gender: Female
Points: 155
Reviews: 30
Tue Apr 26, 2022 4:39 pm
NewHope says...



Hi Lim

I'd really thankful if you would review my poem: Born A Girl
It's been in the green room for a few days now, it's a rant I guess and a little violent so just tell me if you'd rather not.

Lehmanf
Swan Queen's little sister in-law/caretaker since 2022




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Wed Apr 27, 2022 6:48 am
Liminality says...



Hi @lehmanf! Sorry, but as my intro post in the WRFF thread says, this isn't really in my area of expertise ^^'. Maybe you could ask someone else or post it in the General Request Repository? I hope you manage to find a reviewer for it soon!
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Reviews: 30
Wed Apr 27, 2022 9:25 am
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NewHope says...



No need to worry, Lim.

I'll try and find someone else to review, quickly I hope. One question if that's alright. I'm a tiny bit confused where you specify this type of work isn't your expertise. Are you classifying it as no. 2: "Works that dig really deep into mental health topics"
Swan Queen's little sister in-law/caretaker since 2022




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Wed Apr 27, 2022 9:37 am
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Liminality says...



Spoiler! :
@lehmanf Yup, since it sort of gets into descriptions of self-harm and seems to be about a very personal topic. I just don't feel comfortable reviewing stuff like that because my reviewing style tends to be very academic/ style-focused and I think it would be insensitive of me to review something of that topic in the way I usually do. I hope you understand.
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Wed Apr 27, 2022 9:39 am
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NewHope says...



Spoiler! :
That actually makes perfect sense. Thank you for letting me know why.
Swan Queen's little sister in-law/caretaker since 2022




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Points: 581
Reviews: 14
Mon Jan 09, 2023 9:41 am
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Mika Honeydew says...



Hi hi, please review my short story.


Title: The AI war
Genre: Science fiction, Tech



this is suitable for you to review! Please do. Thanks!




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Mon Jan 09, 2023 3:15 pm
Liminality says...



@Mika Honeydew Thanks for the request - I've reviewed that piece!
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Reviews: 89
Wed Jan 11, 2023 1:05 pm
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loveissourgrapes says...



Hi Lim! Can you please review my story you? I hope you enjoy it as well. Thank you!
jisrahinav
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Wed Jan 11, 2023 2:01 pm
Liminality says...



Gotcha, @jisrahinav! I've reviewed that story.
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Points: 5578
Reviews: 120
Wed Jan 18, 2023 3:38 pm
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Overwatchful says...



Hey Liminality! I was hoping you could drop a review on my story Burning? Not really looking for grammar/punctuation help-unless its a consistent issue-so if you could say what you think about my storytelling and imagery that would be great! Thank you in advance!
Quite... Overwatchful
Previously Stormblessed242 :mrgreen:




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Thu Jan 19, 2023 12:18 pm
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Liminality says...



Hey @Overwatchful! I'll try to get to your request by the end of the week :D
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Sat Jan 21, 2023 10:23 am
Liminality says...



@Overwatchful I've reviewed the piece!
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Points: 642
Reviews: 22
Mon Jan 23, 2023 11:53 am
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yamatri says...



hey , ,I am not sure if you are still open to reviewing request but hope you can review my poem

WHAT is youth ?

I don't know how to add the link.




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Mon Jan 23, 2023 12:04 pm
Liminality says...



Hey @yamatri! I can review that poem. You can usually add links to works by just copying and pasting the url of the work.
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