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Gender: queer
Points: 1882
Reviews: 20
Sat Jun 01, 2019 8:53 pm
AtlasW says...



Atlas's Blanket Fort


Hello, there! Atlas here to review some of your works!


Guidelines:


What I Will Review:
  • Just about anything, but I prefer poetry and short stories.
  • I will review select chapters of novels, not necessarily in sequential order or at the beginning of your piece, just don't throw too many at me at once (3 chapters, tops).

What I Won't Review:
  • I won't do chapter-by-chapter reviews unless I'm invested in your story, and have read it from the beginning. If you want chapter-by-chapter reviews, feel free to request for them, and I will review the first chapter or two of your story, then let you know if I want to continue.
  • I will not review pieces that already have 3 or so quality reviews already, as things tend to get a bit repetitive.

Age Ratings and Triggers:
I will read anything of any age rating, but I ask that if it contains explicit mentions of self harm, suicidal thoughts or ideologies, sexual assault or rape, or abuse of any kind that you put a trigger warning in your review request. If you are unsure if your work needs a trigger warning, put one anyway, just to be safe.

Timing:
I will try my best to get reviews done as soon as possible. I will let you know that I've seen your request as soon as I do so, then will get to work on your review. Reviews are at a first-come-first-serve basis, so if I see your request, but don't get to it for a while, chances are I am working on someone else's request. I will post in this thread if there will be a delay in my reviewing for a specific reason (internet problems, illness, etc.)

Disclaimer
In requesting a review, you acknowledge that I have the right to deny any request as I see fit. Requesting a review does not guarantee you will get one. If I deny to review a piece, I will either message you in this thread or PM you.

If you've made it this far down this page without falling asleep (congrats!), then feel free to submit a request:

Code: Select all
Title of Piece:
Link to Piece:
Type of Piece: (poem, novel, chapter, short story, etc.)
Genre of Piece: (narrative, young adult fiction, sci-fi., etc.)
How Many Reviews: (at time of your post in this thread)
Brief Description:
Other: (trigger warnings, chapter-by-chapter requests, etc.)


I look forward to reviewing your works!
Last edited by AtlasW on Mon Sep 16, 2019 10:32 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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by a lack of fear.
It takes guts to tremble.
It takes tremble to love.”
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Sat Jun 01, 2019 10:40 pm
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nogutsnoglory says...



Title of Piece: Too Much Blank Space, Not Enough Vomit - 4.1
Link to Piece: https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/LordStar/Too-Much-Blank-Space-Not-Enough-Vomit--Ch-41-144380
Type of Piece: chapter
Genre of Piece: narrative/ya fiction
Brief Description: Vomit is about a seventeen year old trans drug addict named Rhys, who basically gets into a load of shit and has to claw his way out of rock bottom. This is the fourth chapter, part one.
Other: it is rated eighteen and up and this part doesn't have any triggers I can think of.

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Title of Piece: Too Much Blank Space, Not Enough Vomit - 4.2
Link to Piece: https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/LordStar/Too-Much-Blank-Space-Not-Enough-Vomit--Ch-42-144412
Type of Piece: chapter
Genre of Piece: narrative/ya fiction
Brief Description: same as above, second part of chapter four.
Other: eighteen and up, trigger warning for misgendering.

Thanks!
  





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Sat Jun 01, 2019 11:15 pm
AtlasW says...



@LordStar

I'll get right on it! I've been following Vomit for a while, and I've really enjoyed it thus far :)
“It is untrue
that bravery can be measured
by a lack of fear.
It takes guts to tremble.
It takes tremble to love.”
― Andrea Gibson




previously GodHatesMason, GodHatesShane
  





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Sun Jun 02, 2019 3:47 pm
AtlasW says...



@LordStar Chapter 4.1 of Vomit is finished! Getting started on 4.2 now.
“It is untrue
that bravery can be measured
by a lack of fear.
It takes guts to tremble.
It takes tremble to love.”
― Andrea Gibson




previously GodHatesMason, GodHatesShane
  





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Tue Jun 04, 2019 5:29 pm
AtlasW says...



@LordStar 4.2 of Vomit is done! Posting it now.
“It is untrue
that bravery can be measured
by a lack of fear.
It takes guts to tremble.
It takes tremble to love.”
― Andrea Gibson




previously GodHatesMason, GodHatesShane
  





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Mon Sep 16, 2019 9:38 pm
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Tuckster says...



Title of Piece: Some Days
Link to Piece: Some Days
Type of Piece: (poem, novel, chapter, short story, etc.) Poem
Genre of Piece: (narrative, young adult fiction, sci-fi., etc.) Teen/Angsty
Brief Description: A short poem about pain and heartbreak
Other: (trigger warnings, chapter-by-chapter requests, etc.) It's a little on the dark side but there's nothing that should be triggering.
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Tue Oct 01, 2019 3:56 am
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Fishr says...



Title of Piece: British Love, Boston Affection
Link to Piece: British Love, Boston Affection (part II) (Rated R)
Type of Piece: Short story
Genre of Piece: Historical Fiction
How Many Reviews: Zero
Brief Description: Martha and Welcome Garrison having sex, and the birth of one of my main characters. Humorous but a bit graphic.
Other: There aren’t any triggers I am aware of.
  





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Tue Oct 08, 2019 3:45 pm
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Corryn says...



Hi, I would really appreciate it if you could review my short story.
​I wanted my life back
  





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Thu Oct 10, 2019 10:45 am
AtlasW says...



@Fishr I apologize for how long it's taking me to review your work! I've had a lot going on offline recently, but I still intend on finishing a review.

@Corryn I cannot access your work through that link. Also, I ask that you follow the above template when requesting a review next time. Thanks!
“It is untrue
that bravery can be measured
by a lack of fear.
It takes guts to tremble.
It takes tremble to love.”
― Andrea Gibson




previously GodHatesMason, GodHatesShane
  





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Points: 483
Reviews: 327
Thu Oct 10, 2019 1:38 pm
Fishr says...



Hey, thanks! Since I requested this review, there has been huge changes so now it could be triggering because a character is raped so that said, you may cancel my request if it will bother you. Totally understand.
  








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