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Mon Nov 18, 2019 3:47 am
Miraculor77 says...



Hi! I'd requested a review from you a while back and would like another one.

Work title: Chapter 14: Coffee
Work link: Chapter 14: Coffee
Type of work: Novel Chapter
Work genre: I think it falls into teen fiction, has some realistic and maybe dystopian elements
Brief description: Umm... Ashe questions hers and Kyre's past again, even though she has no memory of it. Kyre notices how cold she is and they end up taking a detour to a coffee shop. Ashe seems to recognize one of the people there, and that woman's face triggers a memory/image, along with a deep sense of loss. Ashe and Kyre get their hot drinks and Ashe notices a strange girl watching them. The stranger looks slightly unsettling, and they rush out. I think.
Any notes you'd like me to know: I am a socially awkward person, and as such, I do not fully understand human interactions. I would really appreciate it if you could point out any places where the characters act or speak strangely.

Thanks!
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Tue Jul 21, 2020 5:31 pm
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Work title: America Gone (America Rising in Portfolio; First Book of ???)
Work link: America Gone - Prologue
Type of work: Novel
Work genre: Politics, Sci-Fi,
Brief description: America must rebuild after a devastating nuclear attack and defeat a new fascist enemy. Britain must maintain its role as new leader of the free world.
Any notes you'd like me to know: Prologue already has quite a few reviews. I'm hoping you'll read through what I've got and maybe keep up if you like it. Currently writing Chs. 5 and 6 simultaneously. This isn't very realistic, but it's been rather likable thus far (or so I'm told).
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This planet has - or rather had - a problem, which was this: most of the people living on it were unhappy for pretty much all of the time. Many solutions were suggested for this problem, but most of these were largely concerned with the movement of small green pieces of paper, which was odd because on the whole it wasn't the small green pieces of paper that were unhappy.
— Douglas Adams, The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy