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Fri Sep 27, 2019 7:26 pm
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LadyBug says...



Hello,

I Hope You Don't Take Me For Granted (This Side of Crazy)

It's kinda cringy but I need reviews on it XD. Can you please help out?
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Mon Oct 28, 2019 11:42 pm
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WinnyWriter says...



Hello, would you mind reviewing a couple chapters of my story? I already have a few reviews, but I'd like to get more opinions/comments/criticism.

The title is The Invisible Kid. Chapters 1 and 2 are posted.

Many thanks!
  





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Tue Oct 29, 2019 12:34 am
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Good evening. ^^ I was wondering if you could review Ch. 1 of my story "Sleepless." For some reason, chapter 2 is out of the green room, but chapter 1 isn't...
  





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Tue Oct 29, 2019 1:11 pm
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Liberty says...



I'll get to them as soon as I possibly can, @dahlia58 and @WinnyWriter! (:
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Sat Nov 09, 2019 9:57 pm
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Jude085 says...



Can you please review my Short?
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Sun Nov 10, 2019 7:04 pm
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Liberty says...



Done, @xJade!

xJade wrote:Hello,

I Hope You Don't Take Me For Granted (This Side of Crazy)

It's kinda cringy but I need reviews on it XD. Can you please help out?
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the moment when you play a prank on a good friend and they react badly and you're afraid your friendship is over
  





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Sat Dec 07, 2019 4:08 pm
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Stellarjay says...



Hey Liberty!
Could you review my Essay, "Isolation or Civilization?" I need help on the strength of my thesis, the strength of all of my points and lastly, grammar.
here's the link: Isolation or Civilization?

Thank you!
-Stellarjay
  





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Sun Dec 08, 2019 6:51 am
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Arete says...



Hello Liberty.
I see you've got a lot of things to review already... So I feel bad for adding more onto the pile, but... If you could review the first chapter of my story "Endobía" I'd be very grateful!
I already know there are grammar errors here and there, but I wouldn't mind if you'd point those out as well. Aside from that, have a field day with this one, feel free to hold no punches, I want as much constructive criticism on this as possible.

EndoB(i)A
  





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Wed Dec 18, 2019 6:55 pm
Liberty says...



Done, @WinnyWriter!! :D Sorry I took so long!

WinnyWriter wrote:Hello, would you mind reviewing a couple chapters of my story? I already have a few reviews, but I'd like to get more opinions/comments/criticism.

The title is The Invisible Kid. Chapters 1 and 2 are posted.

Many thanks!
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Thu Dec 19, 2019 3:33 pm
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WinnyWriter says...



@Liberty - thanks for taking the time to review!
  





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Wed Jan 22, 2020 4:17 pm
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CassieList says...



Hey LP here, I wanted to know if you could review https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/Cassie_List/Entry-one-Little-Miss-Horror-Show-146323 i honestly don't know how to do the link so i did the next best thing lol
  





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Fri Jan 24, 2020 2:25 pm
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Arete wrote:Hello Liberty.
I see you've got a lot of things to review already... So I feel bad for adding more onto the pile, but... If you could review the first chapter of my story "Endobía" I'd be very grateful!
I already know there are grammar errors here and there, but I wouldn't mind if you'd point those out as well. Aside from that, have a field day with this one, feel free to hold no punches, I want as much constructive criticism on this as possible.

EndoB(i)A


Done, @Arete! Sorry for the delay.
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Sun Jan 26, 2020 12:59 am
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Liberty says...



dahlia58 wrote:Good evening. ^^ I was wondering if you could review Ch. 1 of my story "Sleepless." For some reason, chapter 2 is out of the green room, but chapter 1 isn't...


Done @dahlia58
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