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Tue Mar 12, 2019 3:22 pm
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Liberty says...



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title thanks to @alliyah without her knowing it =)


Read everything I've typed out below before requesting, please! :pirate3:


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What won't I review?

1. Sci-fi, non-fiction and too much romance
2. Any sort of poem
3. Things that have mature content or harsh language
4. Anything that's got animal abuse

What will I review?

1. I'll do mystery, suspense, romance (not too much though!), drama (any level is accepted! xD), horror, thriller, fantasy and short stories. I'll do essays, assignments, etc. If it comes to it and you want reviews on isolated chapters (example: 2, 6, 9, etc.), I'll do that too.

If you want to get advice, motivation, tips (if I have any :p), etc., I'll do that too! I'm doing it for two YWSers already, but I'd be glad to do it for more! :D

How long will it take for me to get to your review?

Usually, if I'm online when you give me you review, or if it's a Saturday or Sunday, I'll get to it right away. Other than that, it'd probably take up to a week. That's the max. I don't have a job or anything, so I'll definitely not take long! Sorry in advance if I take longer.

Spoiler! :
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What's the payment?

Hmm, let's see...

IT'S FREE. Yep, free. You don't have to give me any points, or anything, but if you really want to, you can review something I've posted on YWS. Or, even better, you can post a picture of a yummy desert on my wall or in this thread. ;)

But honestly though. Please no points. I just want to help people out. :)

What should you ask?

Tell me the following~

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[b]Name of your piece (provide with link, please):[/b]
[b]Genre of your piece (mystery, fantasy, romance, etc.):[/b]
[b]What you want me to cover (how the plot's going, what I think of your characters, grammar, spelling, etc.):[/b]
[b]Other (anything else you want me to know):[/b]


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Feel free to ask me questions if you have any! :mrgreen:
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Tue Mar 12, 2019 9:26 pm
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LadyBug says...



Hello there, random person I have never seen on here before (Just kidding!!)
I was wondering if you could review my poem You Broke Me .
Thank you so much!
-Jade :smt003
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Wed Mar 13, 2019 12:59 pm
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Liberty says...



No probs, Random Person, (XD) Can I get the link?
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Wed Mar 13, 2019 9:54 pm
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Paulnitro14 says...



Liberty500 can you review my work?
Thank you.
For The Ones We Love
-Paul
  





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Wed Mar 13, 2019 10:00 pm
Liberty says...



No problem. I'll get to it soon. :)
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Sat Mar 16, 2019 8:48 pm
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Horisun says...



Could my brother have a review for Brother Vs Sister, Which Game is Better? (By my brother) It's a short story.
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Sat Mar 16, 2019 8:49 pm
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Horisun says...



Um... How do you link stuff?
  





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Sun Mar 17, 2019 12:39 am
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LadyBug says...



AHH! I'm sorry stranger (lol) but I just saw this. You found it OK, though :)
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Sun Mar 17, 2019 12:20 pm
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@Horisun, you go to the page of the story. Then, you copy the link to it, then, you come back on this page, then, you paste it and post it here. But, if I don't get it in a day or so, I'll try looking for it.
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Sun Mar 17, 2019 1:57 pm
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Horisun says...



Okay, thanks!
  





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Thu Mar 21, 2019 8:00 pm
Liberty says...



I found it! I'll review it soon. :D Sorry for such a wickedly late reply.
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Wed May 08, 2019 2:00 am
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BluesClues says...



Welllllll, if you're still looking to review, I'd love some feedback on my two new poems.

The Children Love Fiercely
SAH 289

They're both about a page long typed up in MS Word (the first one is a little less than a page and the second is a little more than a page). Both are rated for everyone.
  





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Wed May 08, 2019 1:02 pm
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Okie Dokie. I'll get to it as soon as possible. :D
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Wed May 15, 2019 5:45 am
Liberty says...



Done both of them, @BlueAfrica!
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Wed May 15, 2019 1:36 pm
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Thanks so much!
  








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