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potatoefry2001 says...



Just wrote the first part of my book called "Kelly" and I would love some advice and feedback as well as some new perspective. Feel free to be honest, even if you think it's brutal. Thanks!!
  








"For a short space of time I remained at the window watching the pallid lightnings that played above Mont Blanc and listening to the rushing of the Arve, which pursued its noise way beneath. The same lulling sounds acted as a lullaby to my too keen sensations; when I placed my head upon my pillow, sleep crept over me; I felt it as it came and blessed the giver of oblivion."
— Mary Shelley, Frankenstein