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potatoefry2001 says...



Just wrote the first part of my book called "Kelly" and I would love some advice and feedback as well as some new perspective. Feel free to be honest, even if you think it's brutal. Thanks!!
  








Remember when dad's shoulders were the highest place on earth and your mom was your hero? Race issues were about who ran the fastest, war was only a car game. The most pain you felt was when you skinned your knees, and good byes only meant tomorrow? And we couldn't wait to grow up.
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