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Sun Nov 25, 2018 6:51 pm
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I will review ANYTHING, but if you ask me to review several chapters it will take a while before I can get to you.
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Sat Dec 15, 2018 4:59 pm
manilla says...



good day to you! would you remind reviewing this lyrical piece?

thanks!

Double Meaning/P.J.D.L.M.A
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Sat Dec 15, 2018 6:04 pm
Fantascifi66 says...



Sure! I'll get right to it!
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Mon Jan 21, 2019 1:43 pm
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Wed Jan 30, 2019 7:17 pm
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I really want people to use this, so I'm just going to poke it, and maybe someone will notice.
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Wed Jan 30, 2019 8:27 pm
Liebensteiner says...



Hi!!!

This is such a great thing you are doing! There's this story I kind of want someone to review, cause it's kinda urgent... It has a really simple title too. So if you have any suggestions for it then please let me know.

White Wolfina Hood

I'll be waiting for a review!

Thanks!
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Wed Jan 30, 2019 8:28 pm
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Oh, and it's not that long either. Just a short story.
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Wed Jan 30, 2019 8:42 pm
Fantascifi66 says...



I'll get too it!
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Wed Jan 30, 2019 9:07 pm
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All done @Liberty500
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Sun Feb 03, 2019 5:14 pm
manilla says...



The Truth Told

Could you review this for my friend? pleasee be gentle on her!
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From the wild manila folder of YWS's office.

When the last tree has fallen
And the rivers are poisoned
You cannot eat money


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Sun Feb 03, 2019 5:19 pm
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Yes absolutely! I'll try not to nitpick. :)
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Sun Feb 03, 2019 5:30 pm
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Fantascifi66 says...



@manilla You don't need to worry about my nitpicking. There's nothing to nitpick. That piece is absolutely beautiful. I don't even know how I'm going to write constructive criticism on this one. I'll try my best.
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Sun Feb 03, 2019 10:55 pm
Liebensteiner says...



Hi @manilla!

Can you review my short story? It's called Fairy Diary | Day 6. It's a dramatic fantasy. If you need anymore information, please ask me. :)

Thanks,

Liberty500
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(this goose blushes too much)
(lol imagine a blushing goose xD <3)
  





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Mon Feb 04, 2019 6:45 am
Fantascifi66 says...



Umm... Did you mean for me to review it, or manilla?
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Mon Feb 04, 2019 1:29 pm
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You! Sorry, I copy pasted, so... it was mean for you AND manilla
LadyBug is the best frister ever <3
(everyone please know that she's the coolest goose you will ever meet)
(this goose blushes too much)
(lol imagine a blushing goose xD <3)
  








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