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Mon Feb 04, 2019 1:57 pm
Fantascifi66 says...



Ok, I will get to it soon, but I can't do it right now :)
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Thu Feb 07, 2019 4:30 pm
Liberty says...



Hello @Fantascifi66!

Hope you're having a good day. Anyways, I just posted a poem, can you review it? It's pretty short. It's called Blacked Out.

Thanks,

Liberty500

(I almost typed out my real name. XD)
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Thu Feb 07, 2019 4:34 pm
Fantascifi66 says...



Yes, of course! But I'll finish your previous request first though.
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Thu Feb 07, 2019 4:37 pm
Liberty says...



Okie! :D
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Mon Mar 25, 2019 9:09 pm
LadyVendetta says...



Hello, it doesn't matter that you haven't read part one, all I need are some helpful pointers on my worst part XD.

It's part two, all that happens in part one is that there is a ball and the main character meets a friend. (Quick note: the main character's eye color changes with her mood.)

Thank you so much if you decide to read/review it. :)
Abnormals (Part 2)
Jade

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Tue Mar 26, 2019 5:41 am
Fantascifi66 says...



Yes of course!
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Tue Mar 26, 2019 2:48 pm
LadyVendetta says...



Thank you so much! :mrgreen:
Jade

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Thu Mar 28, 2019 7:15 pm
Fantascifi66 says...



Hey @JadeLotus ! I just wanted to let you know that I WILL review your piece, but I have some stuff going on right now so it might take some time. I hope that's okay :)
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Thu Mar 28, 2019 8:10 pm
LadyVendetta says...



No worries, take your time!
Jade

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