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Tue Mar 17, 2020 1:45 pm
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4revgreen says...



Hey, I hope you're still accepting :-)
I'd really appreciate some reviews on some chapters of my ongoing novel "The sticks"
I have had a few on chapters 1-3 so you don't need to review them, but you may need to just quickly skim them to get an idea of the storyline. https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/4revgreen/The-Sticks-Chapter-Four--REVISED-146716
That's the link to chapter 4. :-)
Thank you for your time!
“The sight of one's own heart is degrading; people are not meant to look inward--that's why they've been give bodies, to hide their souls.”


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Tue Mar 17, 2020 5:19 pm
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EternalRain says...



@4revgreen totally still open! I’ll get to this later!:)
“Fate is like a strange, unpopular restaurant filled with odd little waiters who bring you things you never asked for and don't always like.”

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Tue Mar 17, 2020 5:26 pm
4revgreen says...



Thank you :-)
“The sight of one's own heart is degrading; people are not meant to look inward--that's why they've been give bodies, to hide their souls.”


― Shirley Jackson, The Sundial
  





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Thu Apr 09, 2020 6:26 pm
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Hijinks says...



Hello!

If you're still accepting requests, I'd love it if you'd review the first chapter of my book.

Frieda Aflister, Chapter 1

It's rated 16+ for mild language, but there's no f-bombs, just, well, milder stuff.

Be as harsh as you like, I love constructive criticism.

Anyways, thanks for considering!
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green

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Fri Apr 10, 2020 12:56 am
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EternalRain says...



@whatchamacallit Thanks for requesting! I’ll get to it soon :)
“Fate is like a strange, unpopular restaurant filled with odd little waiters who bring you things you never asked for and don't always like.”

-- Lemony Snicket


Check out Squills!

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Fri Apr 10, 2020 1:08 am
Hijinks says...



Thanks!
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green

they/them
(previously whatchamacallit and Seirre)
  





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Fri Jun 12, 2020 11:58 am
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ChrisCalaid says...



Can you please review my short stories?

Poission
Poission

Verex RACH story 1
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Fri Jun 12, 2020 5:45 pm
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EternalRain says...



@ChrisDixon I'll do these today and tomorrow for Team Tortoise!
“Fate is like a strange, unpopular restaurant filled with odd little waiters who bring you things you never asked for and don't always like.”

-- Lemony Snicket


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Tue Jul 14, 2020 6:44 pm
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KateHardy says...



HI Rain!!

If you're still accepting requests, I'd love it if you'd review the next chapter of my book. I think you've heard of it. :wink:

Here's the link: The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 4.2

Thanks in advance
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Tue Jul 14, 2020 7:13 pm
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EternalRain says...



@HarryHardy I definitely will! I'll try and get to it today/tonight.
“Fate is like a strange, unpopular restaurant filled with odd little waiters who bring you things you never asked for and don't always like.”

-- Lemony Snicket


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Tue Jul 28, 2020 6:38 pm
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KateHardy says...



HI Rain!!

I'm back. I'd love it if you could review the next chapter of my book.

Here's the link: The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 4.3
Thanks in advance
Stay Safe
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Thu Aug 06, 2020 1:53 pm
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KateHardy says...



HI Rain!!

I'm back again. I'd love it if you could review the next chapter of my book.

Here's the link: The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 5

Thanks in advance
Stay Safe
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Thu Aug 06, 2020 10:12 pm
EternalRain says...



@HarryHardy you got it! I’ll get to it soon
“Fate is like a strange, unpopular restaurant filled with odd little waiters who bring you things you never asked for and don't always like.”

-- Lemony Snicket


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