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51 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 67
Reviews: 51
Sun Sep 30, 2018 2:54 am
ellasnotebook says...



Hello all! I'm revamping this thread to narrow down what I'm most capable of reviewing and establish some rules.

What I will review:
-Poems
-Short stories/flash fiction
-Scripts/plays
-Songs/lyrics
-Essays/articles
-First chapter of a novel

What I will not review:
-Novel chapters that aren't the first chapter
-Fanfiction
-Art

Rules:
-Leave the link below
-Please do not request more than one thing at a time
-I have the right to turn down reviewing your work if it's graphic or overly violent, or if it goes in depth about something I'm not comfortable with

How I Review:
-Generally speaking, grammar is not my main focus. I'll point it out if I notice it, but it's not what I mainly look at.
-You are welcome to ask for my help with something specific when you request.
-My reviews can range from a single paragraph to many.
-I often leave suggestions in my reviews for how I would fix sentence structure, stanzas, etc.
-All of my review is my opinion. You don't have to follow it!
-I will pick out stuff I like from your work as well as pick out stuff I think needs work.

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I don't expect any form of payment, I'm simply looking to write some more reviews! I would appreciate a reply, however, or a message letting me know if my review was helpful!

It's my goal to complete all reviews in one week's time. If it's going to be longer than that, I will message you and let you know.

Thank you!
Last edited by ellasnotebook on Sat Jun 06, 2020 2:02 am, edited 1 time in total.
  





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Reviews: 162
Fri Nov 09, 2018 9:43 pm
FireSpyGirl says...



Will you please review my poem, Fuel?
"Those moments when your in so deep, it feels easier to just swim down"

"I'm erasing myself from the narrative. Let future historians wonder how Eliza reacted when you broke her heart
  





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Fri Nov 09, 2018 9:45 pm
Fantascifi66 says...



Can you review The Funeral?
Free reviews by Fanta! [Accepting!]

The simple truth is that authors like making people squirm. If this weren't the case, all novels would be filled completely with cute bunnies having birthday parties.
  





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Reviews: 15
Sat Nov 10, 2018 2:43 am
bigsisfarmer says...



Could you maybe review the first chapter of my story! Thank you so much!

I Hate My Life - Chapter 1
I want to read your works!

Message me about anything! I'm always willing to talk.
  








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