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Mon Sep 03, 2018 4:54 pm
Clarity says...



I'll review any category and any genre.

Please don't ask for more than 2 reviews a week.

I'll let you know when I'll have your review done by and if it looks like it'll be longer than anticipated then I'll let you know! :)

~ Clary
Last edited by Clarity on Mon Mar 04, 2019 1:18 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Sat Sep 08, 2018 6:17 pm
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Lumi says...



is a poam
is a sad
is it gucci?
or is it bad? :(
-a poem about me requesting your genius

wrist-a-wrist


also: 125 bonus points for reviewing it for meeeee.
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Sat Sep 08, 2018 8:16 pm
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Clarity says...



1 review coming up @Lumi :)
"Be courageous and try to write in a way that scares you a little."



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Fri Sep 28, 2018 7:37 pm
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alliyah says...



sneaks in to request a review for lack of water
but i don't think i can ever love someone
who doesn't understand that teal
is a different color than
dark cyan.

  





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Sat Sep 29, 2018 2:48 am
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Clarity says...



I’ll get on this Sunday @alliyah <3
Edit - life sorry, I’ll do it today
Last edited by Clarity on Wed Oct 03, 2018 8:02 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Tue Oct 02, 2018 5:34 pm
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Williwaw Chapter 9
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Fri Oct 05, 2018 7:46 am
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Clarity says...



@Messenger @Aley I'll get to these today/tomorrow :)
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Sun Oct 07, 2018 5:34 am
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Lightsong says...



Chapter 22.1: Gael

Yeah, it's late into the novel, but I'll be pleased if you could review it! :D
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

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Thu Oct 11, 2018 1:30 pm
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Traves says...



Hi Clarity

Could you please review Momma's Boy ?

It has a few reviews already, but I have made major edits since then, and there is an important short story writing competition coming up in December so I would like to get better.
I will appreciate any and all criticism that you have, and I'll happily re-edit it too, if it keeps the story in the 1k word range.
Thanks
  





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Fri Oct 12, 2018 10:07 pm
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FireSpyGirl says...



Will you please review the first chapter of my book? It's called A young spy and A young cop
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Fri Oct 19, 2018 2:36 pm
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kostia says...



Hello there! I would highly appreciate if you can find some time to read a small piece I recently wrote. I m thinking about adding it to a novel I m working on but I m not sure about the story line. It is a first draft and there might be some typos in it.
The title is Better than nicotine.
Thank you for your time

Better than nicotine
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Tue Nov 27, 2018 9:27 pm
TheDepressedCat says...



Can you please review my prologue of 'The Horrors of Discovering'? Thanks!
  





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Fri Nov 30, 2018 2:38 pm
bigsisfarmer says...



Could you please review at least the second chapter of my story? (You can do both if you really want too but don't feel pressured.) Thanks!

Taking Blood - The Creature Inside Chapter 2
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Fri Dec 07, 2018 9:24 am
Rascalover says...



Can you please review the second chapter of my story?

The Unfinished Diary of TBJ (Part 2)
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