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Wed Jul 18, 2018 1:54 pm
Laurenh6 says...



Hey everyone!!

Please comment down below absolutely anything you would like me to review! My reviews will be realistic- not too harsh but not too soft.

One thing I ask in return is for you to check out my Medium Blog at the link I've posted below. If you're a Medium user I would really appreciate a follow and a like for my work.

https://medium.com/@laurenhaughey6/the- ... 1531920899

Thank you!

Now let's get on with these reviews! :D
  





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Fri Jul 27, 2018 7:53 pm
Emmzziee says...



Hi, Lauren. Cool blog! Super interesting too. My computer battery's about to die, so I'll do this quickly: Alison
you don't HAVE to read it all if you get bored. In fact, let me know if you got bored! :P Thanks dude. Let me know if there's something you'd like me to review, too. Unfortunately I'm not a Medium user so I can't subscribe, but I'll have another look soon when I've got more comp. battery XD
I want to play a game.
  





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Tue Jul 31, 2018 8:59 pm
imnotperfectyet says...



hey can you review my story, I'll look at it now!Box Of Chocolate Prologue

Box Of Chocolate Prologue
  





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Sat Sep 15, 2018 3:13 pm
serpyre says...



Could you possibly review this? Belli Gloria

Thank you! I'll check out the site~
  





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Mon Oct 22, 2018 3:59 pm
xJoeyx says...



I need a review on a story I am in the process of writing. Here ya go:

https://xjoeyx.writerfeedpad.com/2
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Mon Oct 29, 2018 8:40 pm
FireSpyGirl says...



will you review the 3rd chapter of my book? It's called a young spy and a young cop.
"Those moments when your in so deep, it feels easier to just swim down"

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Sat Nov 10, 2018 2:39 am
bigsisfarmer says...



Hey! Super cool blog!

Could you maybe review this? You don't have too if you don't like it or anything, I was just wondering. Thanks!

I Hate My Life - Chapter 1
I want to read your works!

Message me about anything! I'm always willing to talk.
  





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Fri Dec 21, 2018 3:31 pm
Aranya says...



Hi Laurenh6

Title: Honey and Sunshine
Link: Honey and Sunshine
Type of Literature: slam poetry
Genre(s): romance/queer
Other Information (requests): pls help me its for a competition
  





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Mon Dec 24, 2018 4:32 am
Aranya says...



Hi Laurenh6

Title: Honey and Sunshine
Link: Honey and Sunshine
Type of Literature: slam poetry
Genre(s): romance/queer
Other Information (requests): pls help me its for a competition
  





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Thu May 02, 2019 2:28 pm
Leviari says...



Hello, I posted two poems
profile/Leviari/portfolio

I really would appreciate some feedback (especially on maybe I am not unhappy). Thank you
  





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Mon Sep 02, 2019 9:49 am
wetumbrella6 says...



Hi.

I would be glad if you can review the first chapter of my novel named "Jaime".

It is 9k words long.

Here's the link to it:

Jaime (working title) chapter 1

thanks so much for considering
  








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