Young Writers Society

Hello, the services of the Princess are back!

What I will review:
- Poetry
- Lyrics
- Short stories
- Novels (but I’m not great at it)
- If you want me to review anything else, just ask and I’ll see if I can.

My style:
I tend to start off with a general summary of what I liked and what I didn’t like so much in the piece, then I’ll state and comment on different bits of the piece in sections. Then I’ll end in summarising again what I liked and disliked about the piece.

How long will it take for you to do the review?
- Poetry/lyrics will take me max 48 hours.
- Short stories will take me max 96 hours.
- Novels will take me max a week.
- Anything else will take me max 72 hours.
- This is all prone to change. I’ll let you know if it does!

Anyway, it’s time to get reviewing!
(also ignore anything I’ve said in other posts, this one is correct)

Hi! I would be very appreciative if you could review my little story! It's called Ziva Beaver, and here is the link: Ziva Beaver - a children's story

Sure!

Wow! I didn't think someone would be this generous!
I would be immensely grateful if you could give me the Full Review Service, doing all the chapters of Ramla.
Ramla
Ramla Pt.2
Ramla Pt.3
Ramla Pt.4

All of these stories are based on real people and events, containing real battles, militaries, and soldiers. Also many historical refrences if you catch them. Enjoy!
Thank you so, so much! Give me all you have, and tell me anything you want. I want to improve my writing in all forms.
(Part 1 is really rough, just keep reading and I get better, I promise.)

Sure! It might take me a while, but sure.

Thanks so much! Looking forward to receiving your expertise.

Friend, pleease pleease will you review my new novel...? It is a romantic novel in general, and so far I have finished 3 chapters of it ...

Chapter 1: The note:
Lust : Chapter 1 : The Note.

Chapter 2: Meeting Shanaya:
Lust : Chapter 2 : Meeting Shanaya

Chapter 3: Shanaya Shanaya everywhere:
Lust : Chapter 3 : Shanaya, Shanaya everywhere...

I would be really grateful to you ...

Hi could you review my piece Constance's Monologue , it is a monologue so can be reviewed as spoken or written

Hello!

Would you like to read and give a review for my essay ? >>> Indonesian Ghost Mythology

I'm looking forward to receiving your expertise

eiaeh9 wrote:Hi could you review my piece Constance's Monologue , it is a monologue so can be reviewed as spoken or written

Done!

Emmzziee wrote:Hi! I would be very appreciative if you could review my little story! It's called Ziva Beaver, and here is the link: Ziva Beaver - a children's story

Done!

When can we expect the reviews?

I hope you don't mind me asking, and i hope I don't come off as impatient, but its been months.

I would love for you to review my new LMS novel The Changing Stars! Please let me know if that is okay

Thank you!

Sheadun

GodfreysBouillon wrote:When can we expect the reviews?

I hope you don't mind me asking, and i hope I don't come off as impatient, but its been months.

I’m so sorry! I’ve just been so busy lately. Just when I thought I would have plenty of spare time to review, life became busy again. I’ll get to yours as soon as possible. (I wish I could say when, but I really don’t know.)

Hi! I would love it if you could review my short story, with the One Review Service.

Link : and the snow is falling up into the sky