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272 Reviews



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Points: 15145
Reviews: 272
Mon Apr 23, 2018 12:06 am
elysian says...



Hello - I see you're needing a review, you've come to the right place!

Here's just some information about my reviewing style and so forth:

Things I WILL review:

Spoiler! :
GENRES:

Science Fiction
Historical Fiction
Fantasy
Romance
*Teen Fiction
mysteries
Action/Adventures

LITERARY TYPES:

*Lyrics
Novels
Poetry
Short Story

*Only if you really need me to...


Things I WILL NOT review:

Spoiler! :
GENRES:

Culture
Fanfiction
Film
Health
Politics
Review
Science
Spiritual

LITERARY TYPES:

Art
Articles
Script


What must I do to repay you for reviewing my work?

your soul Nothing, really :-) If you would like to return a review, that would be great! But I do not require anything :p

How do I request a review from you?

Well, just copy and paste a link to the work you would like to be reviewed below, and if you have a certain thing you'd like me to look for or critique on (i.e : detailed vs. overview, character-focused vs. plot-focused, etc.)


LET'S GET TO IT THEN :-)
elysian: (adj.) beautiful or creative; divinely inspired; peaceful and perfect.

formally lylas.
  





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Reviews: 471
Tue Apr 24, 2018 7:12 pm
Lightsong says...



Please review Chapter 16.2: Ilami. :D
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin
  





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Fri May 04, 2018 2:12 pm
elysian says...



HELP (I Don't Have a Title Yet)

putting this here because I would like to review it at some point >.<
elysian: (adj.) beautiful or creative; divinely inspired; peaceful and perfect.

formally lylas.
  





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Mon May 21, 2018 8:28 am
Emmzziee says...



Hi Elysian!

Can you please review my story, Ziva Beaver? It would be much appreciated :D

Ziva Beaver - a children's story
I want to play a game.
  





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Thu May 31, 2018 1:07 pm
TheWeirdoFromBeyond says...



Hi, please review Can they really fall in love? Chapter 1 Part 2 and THANKS so much.
I don't act this way to change the world, I act this way so that the goddamn world won't change me!
-Desert Hearts
You don't think I am weird? You don't know me at all.
-TheWeirdoFromBeyond

TheWeirdoFromBeyond is a LGBT+ supporter
  





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Fri Jun 01, 2018 4:01 pm
WritingPrincess says...



Night-time
I could really do with some feedback.
Have a good day.
My contest: Pairs Poetry Contest
My WRFF: WritingPrincess’s Review Den
  





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Fri Jun 01, 2018 4:46 pm
elysian says...



I will try to get to both of your works tonight or tomorrow! @Prachi @WritingPrincess
elysian: (adj.) beautiful or creative; divinely inspired; peaceful and perfect.

formally lylas.
  





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Fri Jun 01, 2018 9:21 pm
GodfreysBouillon says...



Please review my newest chapter of Ramla, Ramla Pt.5

Thanks so much!
"Yet in our Ashen Cold is fire yreken."
- Geoffrey Chaucer, The Reeve's Tale, I.388



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267 Reviews



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Sat Jun 02, 2018 2:04 am
mellifera says...



*slides under the door* Hell or High Water (Chapter 14.1)

:)
I believe in a universe that doesn't care and people that do.
  





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Mon Jun 18, 2018 12:54 am
ShadowVyper says...



The Charm of Deception - Chapter 19

Here ya go!
In a world full of blobfish, dare to be a batfish.

"YWS' Supreme Nazi of Grammar"~ As dubbed by Holofernes

"THE FEARSOME SHADOWVYPER aka sad fishie" ~ Tuckster
  





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Wed Jun 20, 2018 5:34 pm
eiaeh9 says...



Hi could you review my piece Constance's Monologue , it is a monologue so can be reviewed as spoken or written
  





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Sun Dec 23, 2018 9:22 am
Aranya says...



Hi Elsyian!!

Could you pls review this slam poem on Gay Love ?? :)
Honey and Sunshine

Pls help me it's for a competition.

Shall always be ready to help you in any form!!

Thank you so much!!
  





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Mon Sep 02, 2019 9:54 am
wetumbrella6 says...



Hi.

I would be glad if you can review the first chapter of my novel named "Jaime".

It is 9k words long.

Here's the link to it:

Jaime (working title) chapter 1

thanks so much for considering
  








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