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272 Reviews



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Mon Apr 23, 2018 12:06 am
elysian says...



Hello - I see you're needing a review, you've come to the right place!

Here's just some information about my reviewing style and so forth:

Things I WILL review:

Spoiler! :
GENRES:

Science Fiction
Historical Fiction
Fantasy
Romance
*Teen Fiction
mysteries
Action/Adventures

LITERARY TYPES:

*Lyrics
Novels
Poetry
Short Story

*Only if you really need me to...


Things I WILL NOT review:

Spoiler! :
GENRES:

Culture
Fanfiction
Film
Health
Politics
Review
Science
Spiritual

LITERARY TYPES:

Art
Articles
Script


What must I do to repay you for reviewing my work?

your soul Nothing, really :-) If you would like to return a review, that would be great! But I do not require anything :p

How do I request a review from you?

Well, just copy and paste a link to the work you would like to be reviewed below, and if you have a certain thing you'd like me to look for or critique on (i.e : detailed vs. overview, character-focused vs. plot-focused, etc.)


LET'S GET TO IT THEN :-)
elysian: (adj.) beautiful or creative; divinely inspired; peaceful and perfect.

formally lylas.
  





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Tue Apr 24, 2018 7:12 pm
Lightsong says...



Please review Chapter 16.2: Ilami. :D
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin
  





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Fri May 04, 2018 2:12 pm
elysian says...



HELP (I Don't Have a Title Yet)

putting this here because I would like to review it at some point >.<
elysian: (adj.) beautiful or creative; divinely inspired; peaceful and perfect.

formally lylas.
  





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Mon May 21, 2018 8:28 am
Emmzziee says...



Hi Elysian!

Can you please review my story, Ziva Beaver? It would be much appreciated :D

Ziva Beaver - a children's story
I want to play a game.
  





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Thu May 31, 2018 1:07 pm
TheWeirdoFromBeyond says...



Hi, please review Can they really fall in love? Chapter 1 Part 2 and THANKS so much.
I don't act this way to change the world, I act this way so that the goddamn world won't change me!
-Desert Hearts
You don't think I am weird? You don't know me at all.
-TheWeirdoFromBeyond

TheWeirdoFromBeyond is a LGBT+ supporter
  





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Fri Jun 01, 2018 4:01 pm
WritingPrincess says...



Night-time
I could really do with some feedback.
Have a good day.
My contest: Pairs Poetry Contest
My WRFF: WritingPrincess’s Review Den
  





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Fri Jun 01, 2018 4:46 pm
elysian says...



I will try to get to both of your works tonight or tomorrow! @Prachi @WritingPrincess
elysian: (adj.) beautiful or creative; divinely inspired; peaceful and perfect.

formally lylas.
  





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Fri Jun 01, 2018 9:21 pm
GodfreysBouillon says...



Please review my newest chapter of Ramla, Ramla Pt.5

Thanks so much!
"Yet in our Ashen Cold is fire yreken."
- Geoffrey Chaucer, The Reeve's Tale, I.388



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- David Glasgow Farragut at the Battle of Mobile Bay
  





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Sat Jun 02, 2018 2:04 am
mellifera says...



*slides under the door* Hell or High Water (Chapter 14.1)

:)
There's a thin semantics line separating weird and beautiful. And that line is covered in jellyfish.

I believe in a universe that doesn't care and people that do.
  





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Mon Jun 18, 2018 12:54 am
ShadowVyper says...



The Charm of Deception - Chapter 19

Here ya go!
Shady, Lord of the Shadows

Knight Vyper, Warrior of the Green Room

"YWS' Supreme Nazi of Grammar"~ As dubbed by Holofernes

Victor of the first ever YWS Hunger Games Event
  





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Wed Jun 20, 2018 5:34 pm
eiaeh9 says...



Hi could you review my piece Constance's Monologue , it is a monologue so can be reviewed as spoken or written
  





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Sun Dec 23, 2018 9:22 am
Aranya says...



Hi Elsyian!!

Could you pls review this slam poem on Gay Love ?? :)
Honey and Sunshine

Pls help me it's for a competition.

Shall always be ready to help you in any form!!

Thank you so much!!
  








I say Wolf, for all wolves are not of the same sort; there is one kind with an amenable disposition – neither noisy, nor hateful, nor angry, but tame, obliging and gentle, following the young maids in the streets, even into their homes. Alas! Who does not know that these gentle wolves are of all such creatures the most dangerous!
— Charles Perrault