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Wed Apr 04, 2018 3:47 pm
fishsashimi says...



Poetry, Novel, I don’t care! I’ll review whatever!
wheeee~
  





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Sun Apr 15, 2018 4:36 pm
eiaeh9 says...



Title of Piece: Ballerinas Out of the Wings
Type of Piece: Halfway between a short story and flash fiction
Any other comments: I am trying to make it fairly psychological so it would be great if you could mention your own personal emotional reaction if you want.
  





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Sun Apr 15, 2018 6:16 pm
MasterAvi says...



Hey can you review my prison escape introduction and chapter 1 please?
Thank you :)
The Running Man Introduction and Chapter 1
  





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Sun Apr 29, 2018 7:45 pm
manilla says...



You don't have to review the rest of my Danser series, but reading them would be nice.

Part 5 is still in the Green Room, so here!

"Danser" Pt. 5
Pronouns: she/they

From the wild manila folder of YWS's office.

When the last tree has fallen
And the rivers are poisoned
You cannot eat money

I do reviews: https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=188&t=108365
  





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Sat Dec 22, 2018 6:04 am
Aranya says...



Hi fishsashami

Could you pls review my slam poem on gay love?

Honey and Sunshine

Pls help me it's for a competition.

Thank you so much
  








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