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Fri Apr 12, 2019 12:00 am
EditorAndPerks says...



Hey @zwilliams welcome to YWS! You filled this out just fine. I finished your review!
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Tue Aug 20, 2019 9:48 pm
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Bumping this because I want to reach my goal of hitting 350 reviews by the end of the year.
The only thing we're allowed to do is to believe that we won't regret the choice we made.
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Mon Sep 02, 2019 10:00 am
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wetumbrella6 says...



Hi.

I would be glad if you can review the first chapter of my novel named "Jaime".

It is 9k words long.

Here's the link to it:

Jaime (working title) chapter 1

thanks so much for considering
  





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Sun Jan 19, 2020 7:29 pm
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Alright, bumping this again.
The only thing we're allowed to do is to believe that we won't regret the choice we made.
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Mon Jan 20, 2020 9:02 pm
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Necromancer14 says...



Can you review these please?

The Cosmic Dragon: Chapter 5

The Cosmic Dragon: Chapter 6

The Cosmic Dragon: Chapter 7
Dumbledore: "Now, it's great that you've been saving the school and all Harry, but unfortunately your grades have been a tad low, and, well... perhaps Gandalf could explain it better... hit it, Gandalf!

Gandalf: "YOU SHALL NOT PASS!"
  





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Wed Jan 22, 2020 5:51 am
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CassieList says...



Could you review my work Entry One/?: Little Miss Horror Show
  





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Sat Jan 25, 2020 10:07 pm
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@Necromancer14 and @CassieList I'm done with your reviews, so the review place is open again. ^^
The only thing we're allowed to do is to believe that we won't regret the choice we made.
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Sat Mar 07, 2020 7:19 pm
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Necromancer14 says...



Can you review my next chapter please?

The Cosmic Dragon: Chapter 8
Dumbledore: "Now, it's great that you've been saving the school and all Harry, but unfortunately your grades have been a tad low, and, well... perhaps Gandalf could explain it better... hit it, Gandalf!

Gandalf: "YOU SHALL NOT PASS!"
  





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Sat Mar 07, 2020 11:50 pm
EditorAndPerks says...



@Necromancer14 Finished! I hope that helped!

Review requests are always nice!
The only thing we're allowed to do is to believe that we won't regret the choice we made.
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Mon Apr 06, 2020 5:19 pm
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whatchamacallit says...



I would love it if you could review my poem, A reflection of uncertainty.
(It's lgbt-q related, just to be upfront.)
Thanks for considering!
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"People protect what they love, they love what they understand, and they understand what they are taught."

  





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Tue Apr 07, 2020 3:32 pm
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Necromancer14 says...



Hello @fraey! Could you please review my new short story?

The Sock That Picked Favorites
Dumbledore: "Now, it's great that you've been saving the school and all Harry, but unfortunately your grades have been a tad low, and, well... perhaps Gandalf could explain it better... hit it, Gandalf!

Gandalf: "YOU SHALL NOT PASS!"
  





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Fri Apr 10, 2020 9:27 pm
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EditorAndPerks says...



Forgot to update this, but thank you @whatchamacallit and @Necromancer14 for your requests! Those reviews are now done, so this fort is open for new requests. ^^
The only thing we're allowed to do is to believe that we won't regret the choice we made.
- Levi Ackerman

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Sun Apr 12, 2020 3:09 pm
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shima says...



Hey, hey. Wondering if you could review the first part of my short story - This is my world. For now and forever.
Much appreciated in advance. :-)
  





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Tue Apr 14, 2020 4:56 am
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Alright, @shima your review is now finished!

This fort is open yet again. ^^
The only thing we're allowed to do is to believe that we won't regret the choice we made.
- Levi Ackerman

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Thu Apr 16, 2020 6:16 pm
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Necromancer14 says...



Hello fraey, could you review my next chapter for the Cosmic Dragon?

The Cosmic Dragon: Chapter 10
Dumbledore: "Now, it's great that you've been saving the school and all Harry, but unfortunately your grades have been a tad low, and, well... perhaps Gandalf could explain it better... hit it, Gandalf!

Gandalf: "YOU SHALL NOT PASS!"
  








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