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Thu Aug 09, 2018 10:49 pm
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Fishr says...



Hi there. Would you be able to review this short story of mine? Thank you!
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Sun Aug 12, 2018 5:47 am
fraey says...



Okay, @Fishr! Finally complete! I hope that helped! Sorry if it seemed harsh.
also concord/killeham/perks.
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Mon Aug 13, 2018 6:03 am
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@schediophilia Finally done! I hope that helped!
also concord/killeham/perks.
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Sat Sep 01, 2018 4:51 pm
fraey says...



Bumping in preparation for RevMo :D

I'll review basically anything >.>
also concord/killeham/perks.
farewell, once, amidst a wave.
  





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Tue Feb 12, 2019 6:16 pm
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fraey says...



Bumping again because I want to keep up with Team Tortoise and want to get my fifth gold star somewhat soon lol.
also concord/killeham/perks.
farewell, once, amidst a wave.
  





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Sat Feb 16, 2019 8:02 pm
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neptune says...



Hey concord! I was wondering if you could review my work searching for a second chance ?

Review it whenever you have the chance and on whatever you think needs work. <3
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Sun Feb 17, 2019 7:13 am
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fraey says...



@neptune

Done! I really liked that poem of yours and I had some spare time tonight to write up a ridiculously long review XD. Sorry agh. I hope that was helpful at least? Hehe.

c: <3 you're a lovely poet.
also concord/killeham/perks.
farewell, once, amidst a wave.
  





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Mon Feb 18, 2019 9:37 pm
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manilla says...



hay fray! even though this is a fanfiction, i hope it's not too hard to understand without context. i left a reply on the bottom of shadowvyper's review to clarify - and i hope that helps.

La pluie de l'apr├ęs-midi (Miraculous Ladybug)
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When the last tree has fallen
And the rivers are poisoned
You cannot eat money


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Mon Feb 18, 2019 11:00 pm
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fraey says...



@manilla

Finished! I've caught a few clips of that show with my cousin a while back, but I like the premise of it, and I liked your short fic. Hope that review was helpful!

It was fun to read! <3 c:

(I actually had wanted to review at some point, but then I got side-tracked, sorry lol.)
also concord/killeham/perks.
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Fri Mar 22, 2019 5:29 pm
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manilla says...



Hello again! Would you care to read this poem? It's a 16+ for some mature content.

gratification is a privilege

Merci!
From the wild manila folder of YWS's office.

When the last tree has fallen
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You cannot eat money


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Sat Mar 23, 2019 5:00 am
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fraey says...



@manilla

Finally done! I spent probably too long on that review, whoops, but I did like the poem overall. Hope that was helpful.
also concord/killeham/perks.
farewell, once, amidst a wave.
  





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Mon Apr 08, 2019 3:07 pm
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xJade says...



Hello! It doesn't matter that you haven't read part one but could you review:
Abnormals (Part 2)

Thank you if you do! This means so much :)!
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Tue Apr 09, 2019 4:31 am
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fraey says...



@JadeLotus Finally done! Hope that helped.
also concord/killeham/perks.
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Thu Apr 11, 2019 10:59 pm
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zwilliams says...



Hi ! Do you think you'd be able to review the chapter I have up? I'm new to this website and still trying to figure it all out. sorry if im doing this wrong! haha :)
-Z :)
  








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