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Thu Aug 09, 2018 10:49 pm
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Fishr says...



Hi there. Would you be able to review this short story of mine? Thank you!
No Name
The sadness drains through me rather than skating over my skin. It travels through every cell to reach the ground. I filter it yet strangely enough, I keep what was pure and it is the dirt that leaves.
  





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Sun Aug 12, 2018 5:47 am
keystrings says...



Okay, @Fishr! Finally complete! I hope that helped! Sorry if it seemed harsh.
name: key/string/perks
pronouns: she/her/hers and they/them/theirs


novel: the clocktower (camp nano apr 24)
poetry: the beauty of the untold (napo 2024)
  





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Mon Aug 13, 2018 6:03 am
keystrings says...



@schediophilia Finally done! I hope that helped!
name: key/string/perks
pronouns: she/her/hers and they/them/theirs


novel: the clocktower (camp nano apr 24)
poetry: the beauty of the untold (napo 2024)
  





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Sat Sep 01, 2018 4:51 pm
keystrings says...



Bumping in preparation for RevMo :D

I'll review basically anything >.>
name: key/string/perks
pronouns: she/her/hers and they/them/theirs


novel: the clocktower (camp nano apr 24)
poetry: the beauty of the untold (napo 2024)
  





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Tue Feb 12, 2019 6:16 pm
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keystrings says...



Bumping again because I want to keep up with Team Tortoise and want to get my fifth gold star somewhat soon lol.
name: key/string/perks
pronouns: she/her/hers and they/them/theirs


novel: the clocktower (camp nano apr 24)
poetry: the beauty of the untold (napo 2024)
  





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Sat Feb 16, 2019 8:02 pm
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neptune says...



Hey concord! I was wondering if you could review my work searching for a second chance ?

Review it whenever you have the chance and on whatever you think needs work. <3
you can request a review here!
Check out Squills!
  





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Sun Feb 17, 2019 7:13 am
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keystrings says...



@neptune

Done! I really liked that poem of yours and I had some spare time tonight to write up a ridiculously long review XD. Sorry agh. I hope that was helpful at least? Hehe.

c: <3 you're a lovely poet.
name: key/string/perks
pronouns: she/her/hers and they/them/theirs


novel: the clocktower (camp nano apr 24)
poetry: the beauty of the untold (napo 2024)
  





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Mon Feb 18, 2019 9:37 pm
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manilla says...



hay fray! even though this is a fanfiction, i hope it's not too hard to understand without context. i left a reply on the bottom of shadowvyper's review to clarify - and i hope that helps.

La pluie de l'aprés-midi (Miraculous Ladybug)
Pronouns: she/they

From the wild manila folder of YWS's office.

When the last tree has fallen
And the rivers are poisoned
You cannot eat money


I do reviews: https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=188&t=108365
  





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Mon Feb 18, 2019 11:00 pm
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keystrings says...



@manilla

Finished! I've caught a few clips of that show with my cousin a while back, but I like the premise of it, and I liked your short fic. Hope that review was helpful!

It was fun to read! <3 c:

(I actually had wanted to review at some point, but then I got side-tracked, sorry lol.)
name: key/string/perks
pronouns: she/her/hers and they/them/theirs


novel: the clocktower (camp nano apr 24)
poetry: the beauty of the untold (napo 2024)
  





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Fri Mar 22, 2019 5:29 pm
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manilla says...



Hello again! Would you care to read this poem? It's a 16+ for some mature content.

gratification is a privilege

Merci!
Pronouns: she/they

From the wild manila folder of YWS's office.

When the last tree has fallen
And the rivers are poisoned
You cannot eat money


I do reviews: https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=188&t=108365
  





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Sat Mar 23, 2019 5:00 am
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keystrings says...



@manilla

Finally done! I spent probably too long on that review, whoops, but I did like the poem overall. Hope that was helpful.
name: key/string/perks
pronouns: she/her/hers and they/them/theirs


novel: the clocktower (camp nano apr 24)
poetry: the beauty of the untold (napo 2024)
  





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Mon Apr 08, 2019 3:07 pm
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LadyBug says...



Hello! It doesn't matter that you haven't read part one but could you review:
Abnormals (Part 2)

Thank you if you do! This means so much :)!
"the wedding was charming if a little gauche; there's only so far new money goes.... it must have been her fault his heart gave out"
  





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Tue Apr 09, 2019 4:31 am
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keystrings says...



@JadeLotus Finally done! Hope that helped.
name: key/string/perks
pronouns: she/her/hers and they/them/theirs


novel: the clocktower (camp nano apr 24)
poetry: the beauty of the untold (napo 2024)
  





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Thu Apr 11, 2019 10:59 pm
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zwilliams says...



Hi ! Do you think you'd be able to review the chapter I have up? I'm new to this website and still trying to figure it all out. sorry if im doing this wrong! haha :)
-Z :)
  








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