Young Writers Society

Welcome to my WRFF thread!

I've had this thread for a looooong time so I figured I would revamp it once I regreened again. So, welcome.

I am willing to review anything! Feel free to click through some of the requests/types of works that users have asked over the last few years. I do find it fun to read things I haven't in a while or follow a new story/going back and reviewing old chapters of a work in order to get to the chapters left in the Green Room.

If you'd like something specific to be reviewed, please just leave those details in a specific message in this thread, and feel free to ask any questions!

Title of Piece: Ballerinas Out of the Wings
Type of Piece: Halfway between a short story and flash fiction
Any other comments: I am trying to make it fairly psychological so it would be great if you could mention your own personal emotional reaction if you want.

Hey can you review my prison escape introduction and chapter 1 please?
Thank you
The Running Man Introduction and Chapter 1

Done! Thanks for your requests @eiaeh9 and @MasterAvi! I hope those reviews were helpful!

untitled - chapter one

review for this??

@elysian done! I hope that was helpful XD

Please review Chapter 16.2: Ilami.

Alright, done @Lightsong. I hope that was helpful!

You reviewed this story before, Kille. This has been redrafted. Let me know what you think?

Six Month Journey [Chapter One]

Finally done @Kanome! I hope that was helpful XD

@killeham thanks! Is the story better in first person or third person?

You're welcome @Kanome! And I like it more in third person, but that's typically my preference in any novel XD.

Hi, Killeham! Can you review my little story, please? I'd be forever grateful

Ziva Beaver - a children's story

Finally complete @Emmzziee! Hope that helped!

Bumping this as open for business. And yeah, I'll review anything!