Young Writers Society

Hi @Necromancer14 thank you so much for requesting another review, and that one is now completed.

This fort is open ^.^

Could you review my horror poem, please? If you don't like horror, it's fine, you don't have to, but here it is:
They are coming

Hello EditorAndPerks !


I like the insights in your reviews and I was hoping you could review the second draft of this first villanelle I wrote — Last walk (2nd draft)

I don't need anything too detailed , just some main pointers for a next draft. I'm trying to improve the work since editing is my weak point.

Thanks!

I normally don't request reviews and I don't know if you're open to reviewing novel chapters or what your content guidelines are but I can really use some reviews on the few chapters I have in the green room from my story "Within my Blood" if you are at all possible

Sorry I didn't get to that review @Necromancer14 but I did see that you got decent feedback on that work. ^^ I've enjoyed reading The Cosmic Dragon a lot!

@Traves Thanks for the review request, and I hope that helped!

@myjaspercat I'm going to try to review at least one chapter of yours a day (and if I like your Green Room chapters I might review the rest as well because I'm hoping to complete Team Tortoise c:)

Yo, I'm stupid and gay. I'm pretty bad at writing. I'm beginning to write a story called
Pain For The Game
Though it's not Done yet. It's in the green room I guess. Just wanted to know what you think of my crappy work
Yours sincerely - CatAmp

Heya If you're still accepting reviews, I've got a poem called what to write? that I'd like reviewed. It's not too long so it shouldn't take up too much time.

Alright, review update time!

@myjaspercat Reviewed chapter 2, will continue with this story in the next few days.
@Catamp Will review this tomorrow!
@Liberty Hopefully in two days I'll review this. ^^

@Catamp Finished with your review!

I will get to the other requests starting tomorrow ^^

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All review requests are finished so the fort is reopened.

Hello @EditorandPerks

Is the fort open?

Hello @HarryHardy and the fort is back open! I should edit the previous message ^^

Ok good to hear!

Could you take a look at the first two chapters of my novel!

The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 1

The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 2

I think the first one has enough reviews but it would help you to read through it and I'd like your thoughts on the second chapter.

Thanks for the requests @HarryHardy ! The reviews are complete.

This fort is open once more.

Hello @EditorAndPerks,

I'm back. Could you take a look at chapter three of my novel too?

Here's the link: The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 3

Thanks for the request @HarryHardy ! Your review is now finished.

The fort is open again ^^