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Fri Apr 12, 2019 12:00 am
keystrings says...



Hey @zwilliams welcome to YWS! You filled this out just fine. I finished your review!
name: key/string/perks
pronouns: she/her/hers and they/them/theirs


novel: the clocktower (camp nano apr 24)
poetry: the beauty of the untold (napo 2024)
  





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Tue Aug 20, 2019 9:48 pm
keystrings says...



Bumping this because I want to reach my goal of hitting 350 reviews by the end of the year.
name: key/string/perks
pronouns: she/her/hers and they/them/theirs


novel: the clocktower (camp nano apr 24)
poetry: the beauty of the untold (napo 2024)
  





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Mon Sep 02, 2019 10:00 am
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wetumbrella6 says...



Hi.

I would be glad if you can review the first chapter of my novel named "Jaime".

It is 9k words long.

Here's the link to it:

Jaime (working title) chapter 1

thanks so much for considering
  





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Sun Jan 19, 2020 7:29 pm
keystrings says...



Alright, bumping this again.
name: key/string/perks
pronouns: she/her/hers and they/them/theirs


novel: the clocktower (camp nano apr 24)
poetry: the beauty of the untold (napo 2024)
  





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Mon Jan 20, 2020 9:02 pm
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Necromancer14 says...



Can you review these please?

The Cosmic Dragon: Chapter 5

The Cosmic Dragon: Chapter 6

The Cosmic Dragon: Chapter 7
Dumbledore: "Now, it's great that you've been saving the school and all Harry, but unfortunately your grades have been a tad low, and, well... perhaps Gandalf could explain it better... hit it, Gandalf!

Gandalf: "YOU SHALL NOT PASS!"
  





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Wed Jan 22, 2020 5:51 am
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CassieList says...



Could you review my work Entry One/?: Little Miss Horror Show
lp was here :)

she/they

"Most opportunities are created by luck. It takes skill to grasp those opportunities and turn it into success." -Technoblade
  





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Sat Jan 25, 2020 10:07 pm
keystrings says...



@Necromancer14 and @CassieList I'm done with your reviews, so the review place is open again. ^^
name: key/string/perks
pronouns: she/her/hers and they/them/theirs


novel: the clocktower (camp nano apr 24)
poetry: the beauty of the untold (napo 2024)
  





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Sat Mar 07, 2020 7:19 pm
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Necromancer14 says...



Can you review my next chapter please?

The Cosmic Dragon: Chapter 8
Dumbledore: "Now, it's great that you've been saving the school and all Harry, but unfortunately your grades have been a tad low, and, well... perhaps Gandalf could explain it better... hit it, Gandalf!

Gandalf: "YOU SHALL NOT PASS!"
  





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Sat Mar 07, 2020 11:50 pm
keystrings says...



@Necromancer14 Finished! I hope that helped!

Review requests are always nice!
name: key/string/perks
pronouns: she/her/hers and they/them/theirs


novel: the clocktower (camp nano apr 24)
poetry: the beauty of the untold (napo 2024)
  





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Mon Apr 06, 2020 5:19 pm
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Hijinks says...



I would love it if you could review my poem, A reflection of uncertainty.
(It's lgbt-q related, just to be upfront.)
Thanks for considering!
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green

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(previously whatchamacallit and Seirre)
  





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Tue Apr 07, 2020 3:32 pm
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Necromancer14 says...



Hello @fraey! Could you please review my new short story?

The Sock That Picked Favorites
Dumbledore: "Now, it's great that you've been saving the school and all Harry, but unfortunately your grades have been a tad low, and, well... perhaps Gandalf could explain it better... hit it, Gandalf!

Gandalf: "YOU SHALL NOT PASS!"
  





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Fri Apr 10, 2020 9:27 pm
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keystrings says...



Forgot to update this, but thank you @whatchamacallit and @Necromancer14 for your requests! Those reviews are now done, so this fort is open for new requests. ^^
name: key/string/perks
pronouns: she/her/hers and they/them/theirs


novel: the clocktower (camp nano apr 24)
poetry: the beauty of the untold (napo 2024)
  





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Sun Apr 12, 2020 3:09 pm
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shima says...



Hey, hey. Wondering if you could review the first part of my short story - This is my world. For now and forever.
Much appreciated in advance. :-)
  





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Tue Apr 14, 2020 4:56 am
keystrings says...



Alright, @shima your review is now finished!

This fort is open yet again. ^^
name: key/string/perks
pronouns: she/her/hers and they/them/theirs


novel: the clocktower (camp nano apr 24)
poetry: the beauty of the untold (napo 2024)
  





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Thu Apr 16, 2020 6:16 pm
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Necromancer14 says...



Hello fraey, could you review my next chapter for the Cosmic Dragon?

The Cosmic Dragon: Chapter 10
Dumbledore: "Now, it's great that you've been saving the school and all Harry, but unfortunately your grades have been a tad low, and, well... perhaps Gandalf could explain it better... hit it, Gandalf!

Gandalf: "YOU SHALL NOT PASS!"
  








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