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Sat Mar 31, 2018 2:02 am
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EditorAndPerks says...



Welcome to my WRFF thread!

If you would like a review from me, then I'll review anything, but some of the stuff I don't like to review include stuff I haven't really done before (i.e: Scripts) and stuff I don't get sometimes (i.e: Satire.)

Thank you very much and please request reviews! I try to get them done by at least the closest weekend, in case I cannot get to it during the week.
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Sun Apr 15, 2018 4:35 pm
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eiaeh9 says...



Title of Piece: Ballerinas Out of the Wings
Type of Piece: Halfway between a short story and flash fiction
Any other comments: I am trying to make it fairly psychological so it would be great if you could mention your own personal emotional reaction if you want.
  





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Sun Apr 15, 2018 6:15 pm
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MasterAvi says...



Hey can you review my prison escape introduction and chapter 1 please?
Thank you :)
The Running Man Introduction and Chapter 1
  





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Mon Apr 16, 2018 6:15 pm
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Done! Thanks for your requests @eiaeh9 and @MasterAvi! I hope those reviews were helpful!
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Mon Apr 23, 2018 12:02 am
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elysian says...



untitled - chapter one

review for this??
elysian: (adj.) beautiful or creative; divinely inspired; peaceful and perfect.

formally lylas.
  





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Mon Apr 23, 2018 2:58 am
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EditorAndPerks says...



@elysian done! I hope that was helpful XD
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Tue Apr 24, 2018 7:12 pm
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Lightsong says...



Please review Chapter 16.2: Ilami. :D
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The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

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Wed Apr 25, 2018 2:48 am
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EditorAndPerks says...



Alright, done @Lightsong. I hope that was helpful!
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Wed May 02, 2018 7:00 pm
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Kanome says...



You reviewed this story before, Kille. This has been redrafted. Let me know what you think?

Six Month Journey [Chapter One]
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Fri May 04, 2018 1:20 am
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Finally done @Kanome! I hope that was helpful XD
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Fri May 04, 2018 2:15 am
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Kanome says...



@killeham thanks! Is the story better in first person or third person?
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Fri May 04, 2018 2:23 am
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EditorAndPerks says...



You're welcome @Kanome! And I like it more in third person, but that's typically my preference in any novel XD.
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Mon May 21, 2018 8:34 am
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Emmzziee says...



Hi, Killeham! Can you review my little story, please? I'd be forever grateful :D

Ziva Beaver - a children's story
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Wed May 23, 2018 9:26 pm
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EditorAndPerks says...



Finally complete @Emmzziee! Hope that helped!
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Thu Jul 19, 2018 10:05 pm
EditorAndPerks says...



Bumping this as open for business. And yeah, I'll review anything!
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