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Fri Feb 08, 2019 3:23 am
manilla says...



Your review is finished! @Liberty500
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Fri Feb 08, 2019 11:33 pm
Liberty says...



Thanks! I saw it.
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Thu Feb 14, 2019 5:40 pm
Liberty says...



Heyo!

Title of Piece (Optional): Coco & Me (Part 1)
Link to Piece: Coco & Me (Part 1)
Type of Piece (Whether it's a novel, poetry, etc): Book (6 chapters in each part. The chapters are super short)
Any other comments (Optional): There's no other comments.

Waiting for the review!

~Liberty500
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Sat Feb 16, 2019 3:37 am
manilla says...



Hi, I got your Fairy Diary review instead. I hope it isn't that bad...I'll try to review the above as well once I have more time.
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And the rivers are poisoned
You cannot eat money


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Sat Feb 16, 2019 2:05 pm
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No problem! I just read the review, it was great. Thank you.
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Mon Feb 18, 2019 11:49 pm
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Link to Piece: Before the Dragon - Chapter 29
Type of Piece (Whether it's a novel, poetry, etc): Novel
Any other comments (Optional):

Okay so I know this is super late in the novel and isn't a super great place to jump in -- but I only have one consistent reviewer at the moment and people tend to shy away from high-numbered chapters in the Green Room lol. So if you don't mind, I'd love a review on this chapter!

Bit of context so that you don't have to skim through the whole novel (though I mean obviously you're welcome to if that's what you desire lol)... Jerica is a 16 year King's Assassin. Aerik is a Dragon Keeper who has been keeping her captive on his mountain. This scene comes immediately after she has a meltdown in the middle of the night following a nightmare, so they're trying to work some of her traumatic history.

Thanks so much!
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Sun Feb 24, 2019 1:59 am
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And your review is finished! @ShadowVyper
From the wild manila folder of YWS's office.

When the last tree has fallen
And the rivers are poisoned
You cannot eat money


I do reviews: https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=188&t=108365
  





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Thu Mar 21, 2019 7:25 pm
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Just poking this back up.
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When the last tree has fallen
And the rivers are poisoned
You cannot eat money


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Thu Mar 21, 2019 8:41 pm
Fantascifi66 says...



I'm not done writing it yet, but when I finish it, can you review Multi chapter 3?
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Thu Mar 21, 2019 9:00 pm
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Sure!
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Thu Mar 21, 2019 10:41 pm
AtlasW says...



Hi, manilla!

Title of Piece (Optional): The Consultation
Link to Piece: The Consultation
Type of Piece (Whether it's a novel, poetry, etc): Short story (it will eventually be a scene in my novel, The Archive, but that won't be for a while XD)
Any other comments (Optional): There are some curse words, but it's pretty family friendly other than that. Also, I know it has two reviews already, I just want to get all the feedback I can, since this is going to be in a novel someday.

Thank you so much!
-S
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that bravery can be measured
by a lack of fear.
It takes guts to tremble.
It takes tremble to love.”
― Andrea Gibson




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Sat Mar 23, 2019 9:59 am
Fantascifi66 says...



Title of Piece: Discovering the real world
Link to Piece: Discovering the real world
Type of Piece: Poetry
Any other comments: It's about Earth (wrote it as an inspiration of the climate strike, some of the sentences stood on the posters here), and that we need to take action NOW to save it. Hope you enjoy!
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Fri Mar 29, 2019 9:41 pm
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Sorry for the late update, but both of your reviews are finished!
From the wild manila folder of YWS's office.

When the last tree has fallen
And the rivers are poisoned
You cannot eat money


I do reviews: https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=188&t=108365
  





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Sun Apr 07, 2019 3:13 pm
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Title of Piece (Optional): The little girl stays with me
Link to Piece: https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/4revgreen/The-little-girl-stays-with-me--Chapter-One-144143
Type of Piece (Whether it's a novel, poetry, etc): It's the first chapter of a novel
Any other comments (Optional): It's a little gory, and some speech is in french! It's also pretty long

Cheers, Che :-)
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Sun Apr 28, 2019 4:51 pm
manilla says...



Finished (a while ago), but I'm poking this box back up again.
From the wild manila folder of YWS's office.

When the last tree has fallen
And the rivers are poisoned
You cannot eat money


I do reviews: https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=188&t=108365
  








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