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Tue Mar 27, 2018 6:16 pm
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manilla says...



Hi! I'm Manilla, and I will review your piece! Just read the info below and I'll be typing in no time.

Information


By content, I will not review...
Spoiler! :
-Politics
-Review
-Mature content (18+)
-Theatre


I also won't do chapter-by-chapter reviews unless I personally am invested in your story and have followed it from the beginning. At a time, I can do 3 chapters of a series. Also, if there are 3 or more reviews, I will decline to review because themes tend to get repetitive.

Another thing - I'm not on a consistent schedule for reviewing. All I can say is that it should take a week or two for your review to come in, and I'll drop a message in this thread to let you know I'm done. This is on a first-come-first-serve basis: I do reviews in order.

If your piece(s) follow(s) the rules, fill out this form of mine:


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Link to Piece:
Type of Piece (Whether it's a novel, poetry, etc):
Age rating:
Any other comments (Optional):


That's it. Looking forward for the requests and thanks for sticking with me!

-Manilla
Last edited by manilla on Mon Jun 03, 2019 10:03 pm, edited 6 times in total.
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Sat Mar 31, 2018 7:09 am
Nobunaga says...



I will write just for you, Mani!
"Be the butthole" - Lareine, 2018
  





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Sat Mar 31, 2018 6:51 pm
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@Nobunaga

:)

YAY!
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From the wild manila folder of YWS's office.

When the last tree has fallen
And the rivers are poisoned
You cannot eat money


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Sun Apr 15, 2018 4:34 pm
eiaeh9 says...



Title of Piece: Ballerinas Out of the Wings
Type of Piece (Whether it's a novel, poetry, etc): Halfway between a short story and flash fiction
Any other comments: I am trying to make it fairly psychological so it would be great if you could mention your own personal emotional reaction if you want.
  





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Sun Apr 15, 2018 6:37 pm
manilla says...



@eiaeh9
WIll get to ASAP.
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From the wild manila folder of YWS's office.

When the last tree has fallen
And the rivers are poisoned
You cannot eat money


I do reviews: https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=188&t=108365
  





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Mon Apr 16, 2018 2:03 am
MasterAvi says...



Hey can you review the short introduction and chapter 1 of my prison escape book? Thanks :)
The Running Man Introduction and Chapter 1
  





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Sun Apr 29, 2018 7:44 pm
manilla says...



@MasterAvi

Oh my Geez, sorry, I didn't get to this! Once Review Day is over, I'll go review your work.
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From the wild manila folder of YWS's office.

When the last tree has fallen
And the rivers are poisoned
You cannot eat money


I do reviews: https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=188&t=108365
  





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Thu Jan 31, 2019 5:29 pm
manilla says...



Opening this up again...Send reviews!
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From the wild manila folder of YWS's office.

When the last tree has fallen
And the rivers are poisoned
You cannot eat money


I do reviews: https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=188&t=108365
  





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Thu Jan 31, 2019 9:15 pm
Fantascifi66 says...



You could review create.php?id=143333 if you want to!
Free reviews by Fanta! [Accepting!]

The simple truth is that authors like making people squirm. If this weren't the case, all novels would be filled completely with cute bunnies having birthday parties.
  





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Thu Jan 31, 2019 9:55 pm
manilla says...



The link doesn't work...Could you try sending it again?
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From the wild manila folder of YWS's office.

When the last tree has fallen
And the rivers are poisoned
You cannot eat money


I do reviews: https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=188&t=108365
  





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Fri Feb 01, 2019 6:53 am
Fantascifi66 says...



Multi here, sorry :)
Free reviews by Fanta! [Accepting!]

The simple truth is that authors like making people squirm. If this weren't the case, all novels would be filled completely with cute bunnies having birthday parties.
  





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Fri Feb 01, 2019 10:58 pm
manilla says...



Finished your review!
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From the wild manila folder of YWS's office.

When the last tree has fallen
And the rivers are poisoned
You cannot eat money


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Sun Feb 03, 2019 10:53 pm
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Lib says...



Hi @manilla!

Can you review my short story? It's called Fairy Diary | Day 6. It's a dramatic fantasy. If you need anymore information, please ask me. :)

Thanks,

Liberty500
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Sun Feb 03, 2019 11:16 pm
manilla says...



Done! I hope it helps.
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From the wild manila folder of YWS's office.

When the last tree has fallen
And the rivers are poisoned
You cannot eat money


I do reviews: https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=188&t=108365
  





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Thu Feb 07, 2019 4:33 pm
Lib says...



Hi @manilla!

Hope you're having a good day. Anyways, I just posted a poem, can you review it? It's pretty short. It's called Blacked Out.

Thanks,

Liberty500
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