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Points: 73
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Thu Mar 22, 2018 1:48 pm
Daenyss says...



Hey! It's Dae, and I'm accepting review requests.

What I review: Poetry, Novel Chapters(Please no more than 3 chapters at a time), really anything

What I don't review: Satire/Political pieces and Horror

Cost: Reviews are technically free, but all donations are appreciated! *hint hint wink wink*

How I review: The first thing I look for is grammar. If you have grammatical mistakes, expect those to be pointed out. And yes, I nitpick. The second thing I look for is pacing. If you're requesting a poem, i'm going to look at your meter. If not, I'm going to look at how you paced your piece. The rest is really dependent on the piece and how its written and where its focus is.

If you'd like a review, just link your piece down below and I'll get to it ASAP!

I reserve the right to reject any and all pieces for review.
I'm the most indecisive person you've ever met, so don't expect me to figure out your life for you.
  





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Tue Mar 27, 2018 6:38 pm
manilla says...



You could review my Danser series. There are three parts as of now.

Here's the first one: "Danser" Pt. 1
Pronouns: she/they

From the wild manila folder of YWS's office.

When the last tree has fallen
And the rivers are poisoned
You cannot eat money


I do reviews: https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=188&t=108365
  





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Sun Apr 15, 2018 4:37 pm
eiaeh9 says...



Title of Piece: Ballerinas Out of the Wings
Type of Piece: Halfway between a short story and flash fiction
Any other comments: I am trying to make it fairly psychological so it would be great if you could mention your own personal emotional reaction if you want.
  





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Sun Apr 15, 2018 6:16 pm
MasterAvi says...



Hey can you review my prison escape introduction and chapter 1 please?
Thank you :)
The Running Man Introduction and Chapter 1
  





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Fri Dec 21, 2018 3:30 pm
Aranya says...



Hi Daenyss!
Title: Honey and Sunshine
Link: Honey and Sunshine
Type of Literature: slam poetry
Other Information (requests): pls help me its for a competition
  





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Fri Dec 21, 2018 3:31 pm
FireSpyGirl says...



Will you review this poem please?

Eyes
"Those moments when your in so deep, it feels easier to just swim down"

"I'm erasing myself from the narrative. Let future historians wonder how Eliza reacted when you broke her heart
  








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