Young Writers Society

Welcome to my review thread! I’m neptune, and if you would like a review, please continue by reading the following information!

I will review poetry (any), short stories, articles, and novels. If you request a review on a chapter other than the first, please give me a rundown on what’s happened/what it’s about. I will not review gory/horror genres, nonfiction, erotica, religious pieces, or fanfiction. I’ll accept any other genres. Keep in mind that I have the right to deny any request for any reason.

My reviews are thorough and I always give my honest opinion. That being said, I can sometimes be a little harsh but I do give my true feedback -- that includes some praise! Most of my reviews cover plot development, flow, descriptions, dialogue, characters, word choice and themes -- though it varies. Of course, it always comes with lots of love and effort!

Receiving a review should take no longer than one week. If it does, feel free to PM me and I’ll get to it as soon as possible.

In order to request, simply insert a link to your work, and make sure to add a note on whether or not you want the review to focus on one aspect of the work (flow, characters, etc). If you would like to tell me anything else, you can do that too.

All reviews are free. So, what are you waiting for?

writers' block

I don't care what aspect you focus on, I'd just like some constructive criticism!

@Saruka done!

Here's one for you! ^-^ All my different ways

I don't really care what you focus on. So feel free to absolutely crush it!

@KaiRyu the review is done!

Hi! If you don't mind, I'd like you to review Angel Wings and a Small Flame

You can critique it any way you want! I'm just looking for criticism so I can improve as a writer.

@Cinderquill completed!

Hullo neptune! I would really appreciate a review on my poem, Not enough. I'm just looking for some general overall feedback if you would please! Thanks!

@TheBlueCat I finally finished your request! Apologies for taking so long, thank you for being patient!

In The Mind of Suicide

It does not matter to me how you review this, I just like seeing what others think, but not many will give this story a chance due to the subject of suicide

The drip drip dripping of the rain is music unheard by human ears

Review it how you feel best!

@inktopus your review is finally finished. I'm *so* sorry for how long it took me.

As for @MrsxCreepypasta, I can still do your review if you'd like. It's been so long but I'll try to get it written later this week.

Open for any other requests!

Bumping this!

Maybe on the flow of the story? Thanks!

5 for Nataliya Arlovskaya - Year 760 (Part 1)

@manilla done!