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Wed Jan 17, 2018 1:53 am
Elinor says...



Hey folks, I'm Ellie. I want to review your work.

I will review pretty much everything. The only thing I will not review is novel chapters. Just a heads up, as a reader, I'm not very interested in fantasy, and I know hardly anything about the conventions of the genre.

However, if you want me to look at it, I'll review it!

Sidebar: Please make sure your work is adequately proofread and adheres to proper grammatical conventions. If your entire story is a big block of text, or repeated grammatical errors and typos take me out of the story, I just won't review it.

To a request a review, please submit the following. I should get to it within a week. If it ends up being longer than that, I'll communicate that to you.

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-Anything I should know

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Thanks and happy writing! :D
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Sun Mar 25, 2018 6:35 pm
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Lightsong says...



Oh my, this thread is deserted. Time to change that. Hope you still take requests! :D

-Title: Our Secret Dance
-Genre: Romance, dramatic
-Link: Our Secret Dance [Part 1]
- Anything you should know: It's gay romance set in Kuala Lumpur, the capital city of Malaysia. It's also part one of the short story, so more would follow later.
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Mon Mar 26, 2018 4:36 pm
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manilla says...



Hi Elinor

You could review "Danser" - Part 1 or 2 or both, whatever suits your fancy.

Theme: Fantasy, dramatic
Rating: Everyone (so far)
Link: "Danser" Pt. 1

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Elinor says...



All done, @Lightsong! @manilla, I'll get to yours in the next few days!

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