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The Ink Keeper's Shop



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Thu Aug 17, 2017 8:23 am
Lightsong says...



Door Dwarves wrote:
Welcome, welcome, to the Ink Keeper’s Shop
where comments are given to make you all hop
in joy or in agony in the face of honesty
to make sure you improve, can you just not see?

If you are an author, who likes writing stories
give them to the Ink Keeper by handing him the keys.
He would check at the content with his sparkling ink
and criticize it all in the span of a single wink!

He warns, however, a part or a chapter
is what he can focus to make it all better.
If you give a novel in its entirety,
rejection comes your way in a full certainty!

Also, to the poets who like shedding their tears
the Ink Keeper isn’t biased, you can keep all your fears.
Send your heart written in paper by giving him the keys
and he will comment on it until you fall on your knees.

Now, now, why are you standing there?
Lazy writers and poets the Ink Keeper cannot bear.
Better to catch him while he is in the shop
or lest he runs out of patient and vanishes with a pop!


*keys = links
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin
  





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Fri Oct 06, 2017 2:36 pm
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Kale says...



I saw you liked my story. Mind reviewing it? :P

Keep Driving
Secretly a Kyllorac, sometimes a Murtle.
There are no chickens in Hyrule.
Princessence: A LMS Project
WRFF | KotGR
  





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Thu Oct 12, 2017 12:40 pm
Lightsong says...



@Kyllorac: Done reviewing! Sorry for the lateness! :P
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin
  





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Sat Oct 21, 2017 2:19 am
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Samk642 says...



Hey! Would you mind reviewing my chapter of my novel? Thank you so much! The Darknesses Resurgence Chapter 4
  





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Thu Oct 26, 2017 5:41 pm
Lightsong says...



@Samk642: Done! :D
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin
  





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Fri Mar 09, 2018 9:14 am
Lightsong says...



*bumped*
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin
  





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Fri Mar 09, 2018 2:32 pm
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Kazumi says...



Hi Light, could you review my two essays for me? They're no joke still sitting in the Green Room. The first one is still in there even after last Review Day.

I'm willing to give 200 points after you review them, if you want. I guess that's how deprived those are of feedback. Links:
Spread the truth about fake news; restore the truth in journalism (Draft 1)

A Fun Perspective

Thanks for hearing this outttt.
top kek
  





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Thu Mar 22, 2018 4:04 pm
Lightsong says...



@outvaders: A Fun Perspective is done, but I have to put Spread the truth about fake news; restore the truth in journalism (Draft 1) on hold because non-fiction isn't my genre and yours is pretty tough to tackle. That being said, I will get it done sometime, so just wait for it! :D

Anyone else wants to have their piece reviewed? :D
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin
  





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Wed Aug 18, 2021 1:08 pm
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Lightsong says...



*wipes dust* My my, it's been two years since I've stopped running this shop. It's time for a comeback. :cool:

SHOP IS OPENED! ONE REQUEST AT A TIME! :D
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin
  





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Sat Aug 28, 2021 9:32 am
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RandomTalks says...



Hey!

I saw that you were accepting and I was wondering if you would like to review my short story. Here's the link:

Weight
“Life’s under no obligation to give us what we expect. We take what we get and are thankful it’s no worse than it is.”

― Margaret Mitchell
  





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Sun Aug 29, 2021 4:32 am
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versonix says...



Hiya !! I saw you were accepting and I was wondering if you could possibly review the first chapter/prologue of my new story if at all possible.

nefelibata beginning
Vern!!

He/Him <3

:shock:
  





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Fri Mar 31, 2023 9:58 am
Mikatsune says...



Hey, could you review my poem pleeeeease? its' called The silent struggle!
  








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