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Mon Sep 11, 2017 8:41 pm
kostia says...



Hello there could you please review a chapter for me?

war and his eyes ch2 p1

It's rather small it's only part one of chapter 2, slightly edited.

Thank you!
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Mon Feb 24, 2020 12:48 am
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Reviving this!


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Sun Mar 01, 2020 8:16 am
ChrisCalaid says...



Lavvie, can yo review my poems?
Death
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Sat Mar 07, 2020 1:11 am
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@ChrisDixon - both are complete!


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Sun Apr 19, 2020 9:14 am
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Hkumar says...



Hello @Lavvie I was hoping if you could please review my recent poem
Blood Heist
I am not very good with poetry but tried to do something here.
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