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Sat Sep 08, 2018 6:15 pm
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Lumi says...



A WILD wrist-a-wrist APPEARED!

I'll make it worth double yer normal wages!
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.
  





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Fri Sep 14, 2018 9:36 pm
alliyah says...



I'm all caught up! Any other review requests?
but i don't think i can ever love someone
who doesn't understand that teal
is a different color than
dark cyan.

  





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Sat Sep 15, 2018 1:52 pm
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serpyre says...



Could I grab a review on my poetry if that's okay?

Belli Gloria

Thank you!
  





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Wed Oct 03, 2018 10:42 pm
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Dossereana says...



could you review this pleas @alliyah This World Part one :D also this is Humor, Dramatic, and this is part one to the poem there is won more part coming.
  





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Wed Oct 03, 2018 11:55 pm
alliyah says...



Nice new poem @EagleFly - Thanks for the review request! I do like getting requests for poetry reviews on this thread because it makes it easy to remember! :)

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I'm all caught up with reviewing at the moment. So if anyone has a poem they'd like me to review - leave a link below!
but i don't think i can ever love someone
who doesn't understand that teal
is a different color than
dark cyan.

  





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Mon Oct 15, 2018 1:40 am
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QueerHumanBean says...



I was told to post a link so here you goooo

As you do
Been exhibiting homosexual behavior since Roman Times
Why am i here?
For all of you.
Please don't leave me now
  





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Sat Nov 03, 2018 4:44 am
alliyah says...



Anymore folks in need of poetry reviews?

(Also if I promised a review on something and forgot to do it, you can always leave a link in here - and I will likely review it! :mrgreen: )

EDIT:
Adding these to my "will review list" so that I don't forget:
Spoiler! :


From Chinku
Deep blue sea
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/Chinku/One-dark-night-142497
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/Chinku/quotLittle-squab-a-little-hopequot-142528

From Muzzammil
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/Muzzammil/LIFE-is-Light--and-Darkness-142522
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/Muzzammil/The-Disordered-Land-142525
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/Muzzammil/Its-Not-Just-A-Game--142538

From EagleFly
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=142541
Last edited by alliyah on Fri Nov 09, 2018 7:17 am, edited 8 times in total.
but i don't think i can ever love someone
who doesn't understand that teal
is a different color than
dark cyan.

  





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Sun Nov 04, 2018 1:18 pm
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Traves says...



Hi!
An all-around criticism of good day / bad day is really needed and would be appreciated.
  





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Mon Nov 12, 2018 3:21 am
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alliyah says...



All caught up again! Any poetry review requests are appreciated! :)

List for my reference of non-WRFF review requests that I'll do this month:

Last edited by alliyah on Mon Dec 03, 2018 7:13 am, edited 2 times in total.
but i don't think i can ever love someone
who doesn't understand that teal
is a different color than
dark cyan.

  





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Sat Nov 17, 2018 10:28 am
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Fantascifi66 says...



Can you please review my new chapter, the Fighter and the Dragon chapter 2? Really need critique!
Free reviews by Fanta! [Accepting!]

The simple truth is that authors like making people squirm. If this weren't the case, all novels would be filled completely with cute bunnies having birthday parties.
  





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Tue Nov 20, 2018 7:23 pm
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WriterSister33 says...



Hey!
Would you like to read my newest poem?
It’s called : Poem by Roger McGough. The Sound Collector
  





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Tue Nov 20, 2018 7:36 pm
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FireSpyGirl says...



Could you read my story, Danger on the dance floor?
"What are words if you really don't mean them when you say them?"

"Did you just agree with me?"
  





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Thu Nov 22, 2018 6:09 am
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WriterSister33 says...



CAN you please read my poem Winter, and Poem by Roger McDough. The Sound Collector ?
  





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Fri Nov 23, 2018 1:55 am
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Coffeeism says...



Hi, alliyah, I got a poem for ya! ;D

Would you be able to review let me be hope? I'm trying to improve my poeting abilities, and I'm mostly not sure about the flow of this poem. A thoughtful review would be so very helpful. <3
If you would be a real seeker after truth, it is necessary that at least once in your life you doubt, as far as possible, all things.
— René Descartes
  








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