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Mon Apr 09, 2018 10:23 am
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Mea says...



Pretty please? :D

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Wed Apr 18, 2018 12:28 am
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alliyah says...



I am caught up again!

Also if anyone ever requests a review and I don't get to it within a week, please feel free to send me a PM or post a second message here in case I forget! :D

Keep the poetry requests coming though, I love reading & reviewing it!
maybe i make up colors for poetic cadence, but i don't think i can ever love someone who doesn't understand that teal is a different color than dark cyan
  





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Wed Apr 18, 2018 1:27 pm
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Lightsong says...



I've been waiting for you to finish your last request before I request hehehee. Please review sorry, sorry, sorry! :D
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The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

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Thu Apr 19, 2018 3:24 pm
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elysian says...



I updated an old poem, please read the comment I made in the comment section and then leave a review?

you looked me in the eyes and lied
elysian: (adj.) beautiful or creative; divinely inspired; peaceful and perfect.

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Sun Apr 22, 2018 11:49 pm
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elysian says...



do not make promises that you do not intend to keep
elysian: (adj.) beautiful or creative; divinely inspired; peaceful and perfect.

formally lylas.
  





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Sat Apr 28, 2018 12:17 am
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TheBlueCat says...



Hello! I would like a review on my lyrics: slow down. I've decided to clean it up before I decide how to play and sing it. Anything you can say will help! Thanks! c:
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Sat Apr 28, 2018 4:24 am
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alliyah says...



[just a heads up to @Lightsong @elysian and @TheBlueCat ] I have not forgotten of you lovelies and your poems, I am just saving the reviews for Review Day. :D Thank you for your patience!

EDIT: I am all caught up on my reviews! Thanks again for the requests, feel free to stop by again. :)
maybe i make up colors for poetic cadence, but i don't think i can ever love someone who doesn't understand that teal is a different color than dark cyan
  





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Mon Apr 30, 2018 12:13 pm
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SunsetTree says...



Hello,

May you please review my poem august 2005

Thank you.
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Fri May 18, 2018 6:58 am
rosette says...



I will forever be requesting your reviews on my poetry. Hope you don't mind. :p

Bonus: It's short! xD

More of You

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Mon Jun 04, 2018 2:27 am
manilla says...



Out of Order

Do what you've gotta do :)
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Tue Jun 12, 2018 1:51 am
alliyah says...



@rosette, @SunsetTree, @manilla

You have not been forgotten dears! Super big apologies that I've not gotten to reviewing these! I swear the wait-time for my reviews gets longer and longer on my Will Review For Food thread. And I really don't have a good excuse - NaPo just wiped me out of all writing power... I am anticipating having a bit of time this week to review them all though! So stay tuned for those reviews, they'll be coming soon! :)
maybe i make up colors for poetic cadence, but i don't think i can ever love someone who doesn't understand that teal is a different color than dark cyan
  





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Tue Jun 12, 2018 2:05 pm
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manilla says...



Take your time :)
From the wild manila folder of YWS's office.

When the last tree has fallen
And the rivers are poisoned
You cannot eat money


I do reviews: https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=188&t=108365
  





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Fri Jul 13, 2018 5:39 am
alliyah says...



It's a miracle! I've finally got caught up! :) *sigh of relief*

Feel free to request a poetry review if you'd like and send me a PM if I don't get to it within a month, because sometimes I do get a bit scatterbrained. :)


EDIT:
P.S. I'm in desperate need of things to review for RevMo - so bring me your poetry please! :D
maybe i make up colors for poetic cadence, but i don't think i can ever love someone who doesn't understand that teal is a different color than dark cyan
  





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Sat Sep 08, 2018 4:23 pm
alliyah says...



Some things I also ought to review for RevMo:

&quot;Cryogenic Chambers and Black Secrets&quot; (Chapter 2; 1.7K) (zami's chapter)

Prince of the Moon Chapter 3: Screaming Voices (1.7K) (zami's other chapter)
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maybe i make up colors for poetic cadence, but i don't think i can ever love someone who doesn't understand that teal is a different color than dark cyan
  








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