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Sun Oct 29, 2017 9:03 pm
alliyah says...



Done! Thanks for the request, Mea! :)
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Tue Oct 31, 2017 10:08 pm
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Lumi says...



i'd owe you hugs <3 all you need (is the ever-breaking heart)
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.
  





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Tue Nov 07, 2017 4:38 pm
Lightsong says...



Please review Our Universal Act! <3
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin
  





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Thu Nov 09, 2017 5:32 pm
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alliyah says...



@Lightsong and @Lumi I will be grabbing both of these this weekend - sorry for the super slowwww response time, neither of you have been forgotten - but your reviews are on their way! <3 :)


EDIT: Both Reviews Completed! :)
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Thu Nov 16, 2017 4:09 pm
alliyah says...



[Note to self] Other member review requests to complete:
The journey
i have no choice but to love
Last edited by alliyah on Sat Feb 24, 2018 6:11 am, edited 1 time in total.
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Wed Nov 22, 2017 4:17 pm
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wordwing says...



This one needs reviews: Dying country
  





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Mon Nov 27, 2017 6:27 am
alliyah says...



All caught up!
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Fri Jan 05, 2018 5:29 am
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DrFeelGood says...



Would love to hear your thoughts on
The Optimist

Thanks!
  





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Mon Jan 08, 2018 8:15 pm
alliyah says...



And done! Thanks for the review request @DrFeelGood! :)
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Wed Jan 10, 2018 9:58 pm
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rosette says...



Hi alliyah!

I could use a super good review on this, therefore I am asking you, and this is also Biblical, therefore I am asking you. :P

Here it is!
On earth I long to be like Him
  





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Wed Jan 10, 2018 10:46 pm
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alliyah says...



Done! Lovely poem @rosette !
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Sun Jan 21, 2018 2:44 am
camusic says...



Hey, could you review Seltas's first kill It's not gory I promise and I enjoyed writing it so I hope you'll enjoy reading it. Um yeah, thanks in advance.
  





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Sun Jan 21, 2018 2:28 pm
alliyah says...



@camusic I will review your story when I have a chance, although for future reference I only review poetry from my WRFF thread. You can find what works a reviewer prefers to review from their opening post. :)
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Sun Jan 21, 2018 11:51 pm
camusic says...



Oh my gosh yeah sorry whoops
  





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Mon Jan 22, 2018 12:58 am
alliyah says...



@camusic -- not a problem! I know you're still new to the site! :D I've posted my review of your piece.
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  








Cheat your landlord if you can and must, but do not try to shortchange the Muse. It cannot be done. You can’t fake quality any more than you can fake a good meal.
— William S. Burroughs