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Tue Jan 23, 2018 4:28 pm
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DrFeelGood says...



A Feminist's Love Story

Would love to hear your thoughts on this! Thanks.
  





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Sun Jan 28, 2018 1:49 am
alliyah says...



And done! All caught up again.
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Mon Jan 29, 2018 7:54 pm
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emma1045 says...



Since you're accepting to review poetry: Out of Nowhere

Please review my work and point out anything there is needed to be pointed out.

Thank You!
  





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Mon Jan 29, 2018 8:44 pm
alliyah says...



Hi @emma1045 thanks for the request! You've come to the right place. I will hopefully get that review out within the next 3 days. :)
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Thu Feb 01, 2018 6:43 pm
TheBlueCat says...



Hullo alliyah! I would love a review on my poem, Not enough. I would just appreciate some general feedback. Thanks! :D
Unofficial Blue Cat of YWS =^-^=
she/her please <3
  





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Thu Feb 01, 2018 6:54 pm
alliyah says...



Sure thing @TheBlueCat ! :) I'd be happy to!

Also, @emma1045 your work is marked as a draft, once it's open again let me know and I will review it.


Edit: I just finished BlueCat's poem, so I'm all caught up again. :)
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Thu Feb 01, 2018 11:32 pm
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Que says...



Hi alliyah!
If you could, I’d love it if you could offer some criticism on this poem. <3
Winter coming
I think it got out of the Green Room rather lightly and I feel like it’s too much description without other stuff? But anyway, I’d love to hear your thoughts if you aren’t too busy!
Parlez-vous français?
  





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Sun Feb 04, 2018 12:54 pm
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Lightsong says...



Hey, please review The Law of Wishes and Desire! <3 I need more feedback on this.
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin
  





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Thu Feb 08, 2018 2:25 pm
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TheBlueCat says...



Hullo again! Since you gave me such a good review before, I would love if you would review my haiku, Heartbreak. No hurry! :D
Unofficial Blue Cat of YWS =^-^=
she/her please <3
  





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Sun Feb 18, 2018 3:03 am
alliyah says...



Finally finished those last two reviews, so feel free to bring in your requests - expect about a week delay in me responding to review requests, but rest assured I will always get them eventually! :)
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Sat Feb 24, 2018 6:06 am
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Lightsong says...



Lol I'm here again. What a stalker. >.>

Please review Dear Victoria, You Kill Me! :D
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin
  





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Fri Mar 02, 2018 4:21 pm
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alliyah says...



Caught up again!

Spoiler! :
Note to self: Review Lumi's poem this week. i have no choice but to love
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Tue Apr 03, 2018 5:03 am
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Lightsong says...



You're the person I look for when I need more feedback, hehe. Please review Clash of Desires! Thanks! :D
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin
  





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Fri Apr 06, 2018 4:35 am
alliyah says...



Ah thanks! I will be checking this one out this weekend @Lightsong. :)
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  








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