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Sun Oct 29, 2017 9:03 pm
alliyah says...



Done! Thanks for the request, Mea! :)
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Tue Oct 31, 2017 10:08 pm
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Lumi says...



i'd owe you hugs <3 all you need (is the ever-breaking heart)
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.
  





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Tue Nov 07, 2017 4:38 pm
Lightsong says...



Please review Our Universal Act! <3
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin
  





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Thu Nov 09, 2017 5:32 pm
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alliyah says...



@Lightsong and @Lumi I will be grabbing both of these this weekend - sorry for the super slowwww response time, neither of you have been forgotten - but your reviews are on their way! <3 :)


EDIT: Both Reviews Completed! :)
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Thu Nov 16, 2017 4:09 pm
alliyah says...



[Note to self] Other member review requests to complete:
The journey
i have no choice but to love
Last edited by alliyah on Sat Feb 24, 2018 6:11 am, edited 1 time in total.
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Wed Nov 22, 2017 4:17 pm
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wordwing says...



This one needs reviews: Dying country
  





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Mon Nov 27, 2017 6:27 am
alliyah says...



All caught up!
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Fri Jan 05, 2018 5:29 am
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DrFeelGood says...



Would love to hear your thoughts on
The Optimist

Thanks!
  





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Mon Jan 08, 2018 8:15 pm
alliyah says...



And done! Thanks for the review request @DrFeelGood! :)
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Wed Jan 10, 2018 9:58 pm
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rosette says...



Hi alliyah!

I could use a super good review on this, therefore I am asking you, and this is also Biblical, therefore I am asking you. :P

Here it is!
On earth I long to be like Him
  





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Wed Jan 10, 2018 10:46 pm
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alliyah says...



Done! Lovely poem @rosette !
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Sun Jan 21, 2018 2:44 am
camusic says...



Hey, could you review Seltas's first kill It's not gory I promise and I enjoyed writing it so I hope you'll enjoy reading it. Um yeah, thanks in advance.
  





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Sun Jan 21, 2018 2:28 pm
alliyah says...



@camusic I will review your story when I have a chance, although for future reference I only review poetry from my WRFF thread. You can find what works a reviewer prefers to review from their opening post. :)
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Sun Jan 21, 2018 11:51 pm
camusic says...



Oh my gosh yeah sorry whoops
  





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Mon Jan 22, 2018 12:58 am
alliyah says...



@camusic -- not a problem! I know you're still new to the site! :D I've posted my review of your piece.
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  








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