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Tue Jan 19, 2021 4:44 am
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alliyah says...



Me: Image

(I think I've got two more reviews to take care of (Shady!) + one more literary comment and then the checklist challenge prizes will be complete! :) apologies that it took me 3.5 months to finish these, thank you all for your patience!)



Ah update! I'm now done I think! So this thread is closed.


however you can still ask for reviews in this thread if you feel like you want a review specifically from me. :]
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Wed Jun 09, 2021 12:30 am
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Hijinks says...



I want a review specifically from you oopsies >.> So here's a li'l review request, absolutely no pressure to get it done quickly or anything! Just whenever you've got time and are in the mood for some poetry reviewing ^^

(thoughts swim [together) is a forgotten state]
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green

they/them
(previously whatchamacallit and Seirre)
  





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Sat Jun 12, 2021 4:40 pm
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silented1 says...



that is all that is good
[quote]If it's arguable, then it probably is." - Xeriana X

Link to my will review for food thread: topic71713.html
  





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Fri Sep 10, 2021 1:34 pm
EsmerayaRose says...



Hello, brokenHeartAri here to drop off a poem!

Bright Lights
I promise this type of pain only gets worse
~Esmeraya~

she/they
  





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Thu May 26, 2022 2:46 pm
EsmerayaRose says...



Yes, I would like to place an order for this work here Soil of misery



Uh-huh And how much would that add up to??


I have two cookies would that work??
I promise this type of pain only gets worse
~Esmeraya~

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Wed Sep 28, 2022 5:01 pm
HJYoung says...



Roaring Flames, Heathen Night

Requesting a review!

Should be quite simple as there are only 5(and a half) stanzas. I wanted a specialist on poetry to review it. This wasn’t really written with a distinct message in mind, so take that into account as you read this short poem I wrote in a few minutes.
I stand above this all. For with every virgin kingdom, there is always an august king.
  








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