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Sun Jun 24, 2018 8:10 am
WritingPrincess says...



Can you review my poem, Night-time, please?
Have a good day.
My contest: Pairs Poetry Contest
My WRFF: WritingPrincess’s Review Den
  





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Sun Jun 24, 2018 8:04 pm
zaminami says...



@aulyasela3597 please use the code!
tartaglia, they/he lesbian.
i also go by skylar and reginald!
First member of the bio trio™.
victim of the writer’s block disease
  





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Sun Jun 24, 2018 11:25 pm
aulyasela3597 says...



Title: Indonesia Ghost Mythology
Link: Indonesian Ghost Mythology
Genre(s): Horror, Supranatural
Content Rating: 18+
Type of review: (I don't know, this is somekind of an essay about an urban legend of ghost in my country, not a literary work)
Type of piece: Essay, Article
  





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Sat Jul 07, 2018 2:48 am
mephistophelesangel says...



Title: and the snow is falling up into the sky
Link: and the snow is falling up into the sky
Genre(s): Mystery/Suspense, Realistic (but not really? Honestly I couldn't figure out what other genre it would be)
Content Rating: 12+ for content
Type of review: Extremely Detailed - more detail on plot, please!
Type of piece: Short Story

Thanks so much.
  





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Sun Jul 08, 2018 2:52 pm
Spilledink says...



So I wrote the first chapter of a book I want to write but I'm unsure about it. Maybe you could check it out and give me some critic and tips?

It's basically fantasy
Its called :Dragon Tomb
if i'm not online, i'm probably floating around in the mist of neverland
  





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Sun Jul 08, 2018 7:15 pm
zaminami says...



Please use the code @Spilledink!!
tartaglia, they/he lesbian.
i also go by skylar and reginald!
First member of the bio trio™.
victim of the writer’s block disease
  





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Thu Jul 12, 2018 5:54 pm
ChristenedPages says...



If you're interested, I have a Prologue and Chapter One posted to a project I've been invested in for a while- reviews desperately need for motivation T^T

Title: Achromatic- Prologue, Achromatic- Chapter One
Link: Achromatic- Prologue , Achromatic- Chapter One
Genre(s): Fantasy, Science Fiction, Teen Fiction
Content Rating: 12+
Type of Review: Normal- somewhere between non specific and ED
Type of Peice: Novel/Chapter

I'll also be posting Ch.s 2 and 3 sometime over the next couple weeks, if you would be so kind as to review those too, or if you would prefer to save your reviews until Ch. 3 and just do a big dump ED review lol. Thanks! My soul is yours for the taking :)
"what dose the raccoon look like?"
  





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Fri Aug 10, 2018 11:18 pm
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zaminami says...



I'll get to all of yours today, tomorrow, and on Monday!! Maybe even Sunday if I get lucky. Also, @ChristenedPages I would love to review the other chapters! Just send me the links!
tartaglia, they/he lesbian.
i also go by skylar and reginald!
First member of the bio trio™.
victim of the writer’s block disease
  





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Sat Aug 11, 2018 1:39 am
ChristenedPages says...



Achromatic- Chapter Two

Achromatic- Chapter Three

Thank you so much! I appreciate it :)
"what dose the raccoon look like?"
  





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Sat Aug 11, 2018 11:19 am
zaminami says...



No problemo!
tartaglia, they/he lesbian.
i also go by skylar and reginald!
First member of the bio trio™.
victim of the writer’s block disease
  





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Sun Aug 19, 2018 12:27 pm
Eros says...



Dear zaminami,

Title: Bloody Nails--- 1
Link: Bloody Nails--- 1
Genre(s): Horror, Mystery/suspense. There will be supernatural, violence and adventure ahead.
Content Rating: none
Type of piece: Novel/chapter

Hope you'll review it as soon as possible, motivating me to keep writing, telling me where i go wrong and helping me improving...
  





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Sun Aug 19, 2018 4:57 pm
zaminami says...



Got it! I'll review tomorrow if I can :)
tartaglia, they/he lesbian.
i also go by skylar and reginald!
First member of the bio trio™.
victim of the writer’s block disease
  





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Mon Aug 27, 2018 11:21 pm
Oxara says...



If you still need stuff to review, my LMS is open, but it's not needed if you have too many reviews or don't have the time
  





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Mon Aug 27, 2018 11:23 pm
zaminami says...



All you have to do is link them and place a content warning and I'll review in RevMo, @Oxara!
tartaglia, they/he lesbian.
i also go by skylar and reginald!
First member of the bio trio™.
victim of the writer’s block disease
  





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Mon Aug 27, 2018 11:51 pm
alliyah says...



I miss your poetry reviews! :D

Can you review this one for me possibly? to my father

Feel free to say no, since there's already 5 reviews on it, I was just looking for a bit more criticism.

Thanks!
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  








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