I have way too much free time this summer, so send me your prose pieces (short stories are preferred, but I'll check out anything non-poetry) and I'll give them a solid, helpful critique.
Cheers!
"So the writer who breeds more words than he needs, is making a chore for the reader who reads." — Dr. Seuss
Hello there I just uploaded an alternative beginning for my novel. It's really not long, just the first draft. Any suggestions are more than welcome. I would appreciate it if you could take a look.
“Can a magician kill a man by magic?” Lord Wellington asked Strange.
Strange frowned. He seemed to dislike the question. “I suppose a magician might,” he admitted, “but a gentleman never could.” — Susanna Clarke, Jonathan Strange & Mr Norrell
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